Oh!I wondered if a sense of Brendon's ..idk ... displacement? would come across even through all the crack and porn :P I was writing genderswap as a kink so I focused most on the sex (of course), but that feeling was in my mind too.
The fact that he screamed when he realized he didn't have a dick, and his thing about being in a "delicate state", and his weirdness over masturbating, and his excited little, "IT'S BACK!"... no, the feeling didn't come across at all. :D
Well, I guess I mean it in both senses of the term...
Hee! That masturbation scene was my favorite! I can really just picture Brendon being all "but what do I do with it??! But he came away from this experience with a healthy respect for vaginas! (and appreciation of his dick!)
DEAR SWEET FIBER-OPTIC JESUS I'M GOING TO DIE. HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BOY. I don't know what is hotter, Dallon for being creamy and hot, Brendon for having a gorgeous vagina and it making him all virginal, or Sarah for being such a hot, coaching girlfriend.
UGH GOD I CAN'T GET DALLON'S THIGHS OUT OF MY HEAD. THE STORY ISN'T EVEN ABOUT THEM. AAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEE
*fans self* Like it wasn't hot enough outside, phew!
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and lol - was that wrong? or oh so right ? >:D
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Well, I guess I mean it in both senses of the term...
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DEAR SWEET FIBER-OPTIC JESUS I'M GOING TO DIE. HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BOY. I don't know what is hotter, Dallon for being creamy and hot, Brendon for having a gorgeous vagina and it making him all virginal, or Sarah for being such a hot, coaching girlfriend.
UGH GOD I CAN'T GET DALLON'S THIGHS OUT OF MY HEAD. THE STORY ISN'T EVEN ABOUT THEM. AAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEE
*fans self* Like it wasn't hot enough outside, phew!
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