"Don't Make Mommy Mad" orginal fic

[slave_o_spike]

I guess I'm in one of those short horror story kind of moods.

This is one original fic I won't lock.

Hope you like.

Title: Don't Make Mommy Mad
Summary: Lucas and his babysitter get some unexpected guests while mom's at the local PTA meeting.

Comments

[trintiff]

I love little Lucas! I loved the guy's head rolling into the kitchen the best I think! I think I may have a sick sense of humor, but thise fic was freakin' adorable! *grin - shrug*

Cindy

[slave_o_spike]

You think you have a sick sense of humor?!? Remember who you're talking to here! LOL!

Thank you! And yeah, Lucas is a cutie (I based him on my own cutie, Donovan).

[kika_k]

I like you original story!
Lucas is really smart!

[slave_o_spike]

Well of course he's smart. He has to keep up with mommy. :P

Thank you!!! Glad you enjoyed.

[jackieville]

*adores* Fantastic!!!! Love it!!!!

*squishes and loves you*

[slave_o_spike]

Don't squish too hard. Don't wanna make mommy mad. LOL!

Thanks Jackie!

[brianswalk]

Ah, every mom has a little bit of Ripley in her, don't we? Lucas is a lucky little kid.;)
Did Brittney know about mommy's little parlor trick? I'm curious if she was just cowering from the home invaders or if she was a little afraid of Lucas' mom, too.

[slave_o_spike]

I adore Ripley. Seriously.

No, Brittney didn't know. I think she was freaking out because of the home invasion but watching her temp employer changing might have done her in a bit.

Time for a new Brittney I think. :P Thank you! *hugs you*

[tdorian]

I love this ! It's always great when you take the voice of a child. And you really have a way to bring terror in very ordinary things and not overdoing it.Aida

[slave_o_spike]

Thank you Aida!!!! I LOVE that feedback.

These are all things I try very hard at - making sure my child's voice is convincing as well as endearing AND showing how the ordinary can be just as scary as the extraordinary while not overdoing it. *kisses you*