Brian/Justin standalone - "Within These Here Walls"

[slave_o_spike]

Okay, here's the short Brian/Justin horror story.

I sure hope I don't lose any friends over this...

Anywho, I need to take a moment to say, This is not an indication of where my Brian/Justin will be going. I am not trying to leave the fandom by doing this. It's just a plot bunny that grabbed hold and wouldn't let go

Comments

[a_life_defiant]

Jesus, Mary, and Fucking Joseph! *clutches chest*

Ok, let me start off with I don't hate it.

Am I a bit stunned by this new concept? Yes. But am I hunting you down w/a pitchfork? Oddly enough, no.

So where the hell am I?? Intrigued. Yes I would definitely put me at the corner of Huh? & Intrigued.

[slave_o_spike]

Okay, that is a good start. Not hating is good. LOL!

It is a bit of a stunner, innit?

Intrigued is even better than not hating. :) Thank you! (And yes, I do tend to push the envelope at times but this one pushed the envelope into the next state!)

[a_life_defiant]

I think the envelope actually ended up somewhere in Asia.... but that's ok b/c I like Thai food... ;)

[slave_o_spike]

LOL! I like you. :)

[rosy5000]

First of all... HOW THE HELL CAN YOU KILL BRIAN?????? I mean, Michael, sure, but Brian?

Secondly... I didn't cry. *does little victory dance*

Thirdly... Holy shit that was well written and very creepy. If I have any nightmares about Brian dieing, I'm blaming them all on you.

Forthly... I may never look at Britin the same way again. Creepy, haunted, evil house!

*wonders off to find happy fic to read before bed*

[slave_o_spike]

On your first point - its a horror story. Had I killed Mikey, it would have been a comedy!

On your second point - good girl!

On your third point - I am responsible for most people's nightmares. I think some people have dreamed about Brian turning them into sausage.

On your fourth point - I never liked the house and thought it was due a good murder mystery story or something.

You could read my Justin's Baby fic.

But that might give you bad dreams about monkey babies and Satan.

Or you could read my cannibal fic. But that could give you dreams about...well...cannibals.

Um...see? I'm really not the person to read before bedtime.

Thanks Rosy! ILU

[chamilet]

Wow. That was like a Tale From the Crypt!! Probably wasn't my best choice for reading right before bed though...

[slave_o_spike]

No, you probably shouldn't read this before bedtime. I need to put a bedtime warning on my fics. And if you really want to have a hard time sleeping, in no way, shape or form should you visit the Fewdio.com site!

Of course, now that I've said that, you're going to go over there right now...

Thank you!!!

[bluemchenkaffee]

I loved your little story, Maria. Maybe you could have even made a multi-chapter story from that idea.
No need to run and hide because I love horror stories.

Hugs
Susanne

[slave_o_spike]

I don't know. Multi chapter fic on this one might have been hard, especially with the downer ending. LOL!

Thank you Susanne! *hugs and kisses you*

[tv_fan_2008]

I liked it. It was very well written and an original idea for a B/J fic.

[slave_o_spike]

Thank you! And yeah, I'm pretty sure Justin killing Brian during a psychotic episode hasn't been done. :P