Brian/Justin standalone - "Within These Here Walls"

[slave_o_spike]

Okay, here's the short Brian/Justin horror story.

I sure hope I don't lose any friends over this...

Anywho, I need to take a moment to say, This is not an indication of where my Brian/Justin will be going. I am not trying to leave the fandom by doing this. It's just a plot bunny that grabbed hold and wouldn't let go

Comments

[trintiff]

I fucking loved it! Britin talking to Justin until he is insane ... brilliant! Psychological horror is the best kind ... much better than "slasher" fics. It's much more terrifying to watch someone being driven slowly insane! You did a damn good job with Justin! I hope these muses don't run away just yet! :-D

[slave_o_spike]

These muses are here to stay. All my work has taken a dark turn lately. :P

And yes, this is the true horror. As I was stating above - one could look at a slasher as a horror story, but its the person who you live with, that you trust every day of your life with, and then turning that's far more scary than anything else.

I was hoping I conveyed Justin's slow descent so people could see it happening. Thank you!!! :)

[nicotine_gum]

THATS AWFUL.

[slave_o_spike]

I know...I know...

[kika_k]

I'm speechless! LoL
Crazy Justin! Uaaa! I like it!
to quote rosy5000
Forthly... I may never look at Britin the same way again. Creepy, haunted, evil house! ME TOO! :P

[slave_o_spike]

You gotta write a crazy Justin at least once I always say. :P

I thought the house was creepy. I mean, seriously. Two young men, who never plan on having children. Why would they get a house like that?!?!

Thank you!!!

[fancypantsdylan]

WTF?!?!

But saying that, wow that was very powerful and so totally believable that it could happen to Justin. Brilliant hon, wonderful writing.

Now go and write a sequel where it was all a horrible dream ;D, LOL

[slave_o_spike]

Thank you! And that's what I was shooting for, although its still in the realm of the supernatural (or is it?) I still sometimes want to show the broken and fragile Justin because i think he was always there.

Sorry, I'm not pulling a Dallas. :P

[evieliddy]

I loved this! Very disturbing but that's what you want in a horror fic, otherwise I wouldn't read! So well written, as your stuff always is.

[slave_o_spike]

Yep - its horror alright.

Thank you! *blushes*