Poetry Friday: November by Alice Winifred Finnegan

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The darkened pool showed autumn in its glass

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[lpsalas]

Beautiful! That imagery in the first stanza is just gorgeous! Laura

[slayground]

Isn't it? :)

[mlyearofreading]

Ooh..."the winds vast words..." YES!

[slayground]

I've heard people talk about the wind whispering through the trees -- I think they're whispering TO the trees as well!

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"The darkened pool showed autumn in its glass,"-What a great visual this line creates! Thank you for the November poem, Little Willow.

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[slayground]

Isn't that cool?

Thanks for sharing this lovely poem

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You've really captured the feeling of autumn--the wind's vast words--and the birds doubtful music. This is really lovely.

Re: Thanks for sharing this lovely poem

[slayground]

I'm glad I found it!