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FIC: The Promise

Apr 22, 2013 21:44

Title: The Promise
Author: sleeper6
Characters: Luke/Reid
Rating: PG
Summary: The comment fic series continues: Will Luke move out after all?
Disclaimer: All belongs to the As the World Turns, not me.
Notes: For the FFF prompts Walk of Shame and Promises. This one was longer so I had to post here instead.

( The angst continues . . . )

comment fic, reid oliver, fic, lure, atwt, fun fic friday, luke snyder

Comments 32

msmurph123 April 23 2013, 11:30:03 UTC

Great chapter. Way to go Chris, he was a good friend. Can't wait for their conversation.

sleeper6 July 14 2013, 05:48:52 UTC

He was, wasn't he?

Thanks for reading! The final part is finally up.

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sleeper6 July 14 2013, 05:48:20 UTC

Sorry about the angst, really!

Chris isn't all bad--or at least he tries not to be after all his other idiotic actions.

The final chapter is up; hope you like it!

scotianova April 23 2013, 12:24:34 UTC

Reid and Chris sharing a bed ;))))))

Great chapter!

sleeper6 July 14 2013, 05:47:34 UTC

I like them sharing a bed for some reason. I just like that image. Ha ha.

Thanks for reading!

kccalgal April 23 2013, 14:15:25 UTC

Its a good thing you wrote this. If I had Reid waking up hungover to find Chris in bed next to him I probably would have had Reid throw up. lol

I love the way you are building the suspense up. You are giving only vague ideas of what happened leaving us all to wonder about the details. It is very effective. Reid appears to be buckling from all the stress of the strained relationship.

Luke's reaction to Reid walking in disheveled was so him. He would give his best bitch face demanding every detail then back off not wanting to know. I can't wait to see where he goes from here. Great great writing.

sleeper6 July 14 2013, 06:00:22 UTC

Reid probably threw up a little in his mouth. Ha ha

Thanks so much for your wonderful feedback! I just posted the final part and it reveals a lot more (though maybe not everything) about what happened. Hope you enjoy it.

Thanks for reading!

moerlin April 23 2013, 14:35:25 UTC

Am I the only one who really wanted Reid to have slept with someone else? Okay then...

I'm really digging the angst and curious to find out what actually happened between them to cause this mess. Don't say yes too quickly, Luke. ;)

teddybear9298 April 25 2013, 00:37:50 UTC

No, you're not the only one lol.

sleeper6 July 14 2013, 05:55:31 UTC

I couldn't do it. I almost did but I couldn't. :(

sleeper6 July 14 2013, 05:54:23 UTC

I'm sorry but I just couldn't go there, no matter how hard I tried. Hee

What happened is finally revealed in last chapter, which I just posted. Hope it's somewhat satisfying.

Thanks for reading!