FIC: Oakdale is Not So Bad - Part 10

May 23, 2013 17:58

Title: Oakdale is Not So Bad - Part 10
Author: sleeper6
Characters: Reid/Luke, various Oakdale citizens, and . . . Damian
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All belongs to As the World Turns, not me.
Summary: Sequel to Dad is Not So Bad. After Reid moves to Oakdale to be with Luke, he has trouble adjusting to his new life and relationship.
Notes: This is the end. Oh ( Read more... )

reid oliver, fic, lure, atwt, luke snyder

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shadownyc May 24 2013, 00:02:19 UTC
I love how you ended this story! Fabulous fic!!!

Congratulations and best of luck with the script. I bet it'll be amazing. :D

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sleeper6 May 27 2013, 18:08:33 UTC
Thank you so much for your comments throughout--they're always appreciated!

Thanks. I hope it'll be . . . decent. :)

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tldreamer May 24 2013, 00:39:41 UTC
Wah! I'm flailing on my couch with happiness. This was a wonderful last chapter to this great story.....a truly happy ending for all! LOVED THIS SO MUCH!!!

Oh, and congrats on being a selection for the LRO reading club!! I wonder if I've read it....I'll have to check!

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sleeper6 May 27 2013, 18:09:11 UTC
Wow, thanks for such a wonderful comment. Glad you enjoyed it.

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kccalgal May 24 2013, 02:48:22 UTC
Fabulous ending! Damian did manipulate the situation after all, but still not to such a degree that Luke could feel used. Wisely, neither Luke nor Reid will ever completely trust Damian, but at least Luke can believe that whatever Damian does it is out of love for Luke. Bravo Sleeeper!

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sleeper6 May 27 2013, 18:12:51 UTC
Damian manipulated things for sure but with good intentions. He does it out of love, even if it's not always right. But well, that's Damian for you.

Thanks so much for all your comments throughout!

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vision_m May 24 2013, 04:27:15 UTC
As always excellent ending to a wonderful story. What I loved most about this story is how you you wrote Damian, yes he may not be the best father in the world but at his core he always loves Luke and he would do anything for him to make him happy and he did by giving Luke the ultimate gift love from another.

Loved this so much can't wait for your next story.

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sleeper6 May 27 2013, 18:18:57 UTC
I didn't want Damian to be a villain. He is trying to be a good dad and he even returned to Oakdale to try to be a good husband but well, Lily's moved on. Glad you liked this version of Damian.

Thank you SO much for all your comments throughout. I know I took forever writing this but I was going to finish it.

I'll try to get writing my next one soon. :)

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limeybird2 May 24 2013, 06:08:47 UTC
this has been a fantastic story & i enjoyed reading it. i'm glad Damian wasn't a bad dad since i loved his character on the show.
i'm glad Luke asked Noah not to come for christmas since really he's not a part of Luke's family anymore since usually that happens when couples break up.

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sleeper6 May 27 2013, 18:20:12 UTC
Yeah, Damian might not be perfect but he is trying to be a good enough dad for Luke.

Yeah, Luke and Noah are done for sure. :)

Thank you so much for reading & commenting!

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