That was adorable! I love James getting to show his gallant side by getting her the frogs she wanted!
Would it kill him to leave me alone for a term, just for the sake of change? - that made me laugh, and also said a lot about James' past determination.
I also liked the bit about Lily liking to put the frogs in her tea - it was very vivid.
Thanks for the feedback! Yay! I got a laugh! I think James is starting to learn that driving a girl crazy is not always the best way to win her heart. The whole frogs thing just came to me randomly but I decided to stick with it- it fits with the idea of Lily that I have in my head. Thank you for reading =)
Sorry about the big gap between when you wrote this and when I actually got around to reading it, becky!
However, I regret not reading it earlier because it's really good! I mean fantastic :D!
I especially like the bits about the chocolate frogs in the tea and Margaret going deaf. So cute! One thing- there is a typo at the begginning, where you meant "saw" you wrote "say"
Awww thanks babe, you always make me feel awesome. Fixed the typo, thanks for that! It's okay that you haven't gotten the chapter out yet. I figure, it would be better for me to have you write it when you're NOT worried about finals so that the coolness factor can reach max capacity. But I'm really excited about it, what I read so far is pretty awesome. Don't keep me waiting tooo long!
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Would it kill him to leave me alone for a term, just for the sake of change?
- that made me laugh, and also said a lot about James' past determination.
I also liked the bit about Lily liking to put the frogs in her tea - it was very vivid.
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Yay! I got a laugh! I think James is starting to learn that driving a girl crazy is not always the best way to win her heart.
The whole frogs thing just came to me randomly but I decided to stick with it- it fits with the idea of Lily that I have in my head.
Thank you for reading =)
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However, I regret not reading it earlier because it's really good! I mean fantastic :D!
I especially like the bits about the chocolate frogs in the tea and Margaret going deaf. So cute! One thing- there is a typo at the begginning, where you meant "saw" you wrote "say"
Other than that, it's brilliant!
I owe you a chapter :( Sorry!
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Fixed the typo, thanks for that!
It's okay that you haven't gotten the chapter out yet. I figure, it would be better for me to have you write it when you're NOT worried about finals so that the coolness factor can reach max capacity. But I'm really excited about it, what I read so far is pretty awesome. Don't keep me waiting tooo long!
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