Ghazal

May 11, 2007 12:04

May 3, 2007
edited May 18thhere is a rough ghazal from the train ride... a ghazal uses a pattern of repeated rhyme words and end words. (for example, my final rhyming word before the end of all of the second lines is "cast" and the ending phrase of each couplet ends with "windows"). a turn between the lines, no enjambment between couplets, and ( Read more... )

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glissandi May 13 2007, 20:25:58 UTC
I think it's a great ghazal...proud of you!
we'll find someone to put it to music.

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