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[sleepy_aussie]

So. A problem.

This week I re-worked an old Scene of Anna's. One where she is beaten the nasty one of her brothers and saved by another brother... the writing itself is okay, I think. The scene carries the story, although it might be a bit a abrupt - I will go back and check in a couple of weeks...

The trouble comes in that I have no experience in

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[tigerweave]

Send it to me and I will read it and let you know.

And if it is all too much and I can't I will let you know too and send it back.

Probably the biggest thing is understanding the adrenaline reaction. She will have it flooding her system then and for a while to come. So would the Nastybro. And so would the Nicebro.

You know fight or flight stuff. Or freezing in the moment.

[sleepy_aussie]

I would apreciate help, but I absolutely do not want to trigger you or distress you! *hugs*

[tigerweave]

yeah.... I wonder....

Never had any problems with bros you see,
but maybe it would trigger me.

Have a think about the adrenaline stuff then, and maybe some day in the future if you are still not sure I can read it and see...

[sleepy_aussie]

*smooches*