Comments | sleepy_dork: short story

sleepy_dork

short story

Dec 13, 2005 16:14

People liked my short story more than I expected today. Especially since I wrote the beginning and the end early this morning. I had the middle done last night, then got bad writers block and said "screw it, i'm going to bed." Anyway, I'm posting it on here, because i'm nice like that. Some sentances would be a lot better re-written, and i ( Read more... )

Comments 6

melt_your_face December 14 2005, 00:56:22 UTC

If it were me, I'd be on him like an Ethiopian boy on a bowl of rice!

Nice story :)

sleepy_dork December 14 2005, 02:24:26 UTC

ahahaha, i liked yours too, but no closure makes bradford sad :(

melt_your_face December 14 2005, 02:54:47 UTC

It was meant to be like that! It's so you can make up your own ending. They got married. They didn't. She killed him. Mme. Loiselle got killed. They just had a really nice conversation. He spilled tea on his shirt. King Kong stopped by. Endless possibilities.

sleepy_dork December 14 2005, 03:08:33 UTC

i'm gonna go with king kong stopped by, they had a nice conversation, Kong married them, but then Kong spilled tea on mme. loiselle and it burned her to death

brokentryst December 14 2005, 05:36:18 UTC

i like the story, it's really different. it definitely caught my attention at the beginning. the content's great, grammar.. well, you know that already.

what! math test!? you screwed up?? TELL ME ABOUT IT TOMORROW!!

sleepy_dork December 14 2005, 22:39:04 UTC

heh, grammer, i didn't really even proofread it, oh well