Fast Cars, Fast Women, and Cheap Drinks: Part 15

Feb 15, 2010 12:46


Summary: I can feel the brunette smirk against my collarbone, seemingly unaffected, but the way her hands tighten around my hips tells me that she wants me just as much as I want her. The way she pushes her body against mine as I drag my hands up and down her back, drawing aimlessly into her skin, makes damn sure I know it.

Chapter Fifteen: If I had any doubts about finally giving in to Demi... )

demi lovato, selena gomez

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bluestarlight09 February 15 2010, 21:08:26 UTC
:) that made me smile, I like how you write both Demi and Selena. I smiled when you updated and it grew into a grin when I read it. Looking forward to the next update :)

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sleepy_writer08 May 13 2010, 22:38:52 UTC
I love writing these two. It just comes so naturally. After a long, unnecessary hiatus, I'm back with another update. :D

http://sleepy-writer08.livejournal.com/6997.html

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demifan90 February 15 2010, 21:27:23 UTC
OH. MY. GOD.

first of all, lemme go flop in the snow that's in my backyard.
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so that was amazing. I love how it just changed seamlessly; from sexy to tender, to a wonderful combination of both, it was just beautiful in the words of Demi.

I think what I love slightly more...is the fact that they aren't completely sure. The nerves are still there. I love how you didn't make it something they're both so sure about. It wasn't just hot and sexy....their was a pure quality there...

loved it. Wonderful job, Twinny.

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demifan90 February 15 2010, 21:40:25 UTC
....there*

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sleepy_writer08 May 13 2010, 22:39:19 UTC
Thaaaaaank you!

here's the next update!

http://sleepy-writer08.livejournal.com/6997.html

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sole_knightley February 15 2010, 22:35:05 UTC
*comes back from cold shower*

That was really hot!
I love how they tease each other and how sweet Demi is to Sel. And Selena not knowing exactly what to do was very cute!

Good job, Bia. Loved it.

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sleepy_writer08 May 13 2010, 22:39:52 UTC
Thaaaaank you, Sole. :)

Congratulations again on all the good news lately.

The next part is just a click away. http://sleepy-writer08.livejournal.com/6997.html

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amazingwaffles February 15 2010, 23:03:01 UTC
i loved the last few lines!! and im so happy now! :D i love it all! great job!

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sleepy_writer08 May 13 2010, 22:40:21 UTC
YAY! I'm so glad that you're glad.

Here's the next part! http://sleepy-writer08.livejournal.com/6997.html

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cerasi05 February 16 2010, 00:20:11 UTC
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You just made my Monday. Not even kidding. I came home and was like *SIGH* but when I got on LJ and saw this I was like :DDDDDDD and *FLAIL*

How do I love this chapter? Let me count the ways.... For one thing, it was absolutely perfect. The entire story build up to this moment, and you held true to each of the character's personalities during this chapter, which is very impressive. Secondly, it was SO FUCKING HOT.

Those are only two of the reasons I love this chapter, but my brain short circuited, so I'll have to reread it a few more times to fully grasp it's awesomeness :D

I hope you get you laptop to work again soon so you can get back on skype! :D

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sleepy_writer08 May 13 2010, 22:41:01 UTC
You, my dear, are the reason this next part is even here. So please enjoy the next chapter and keep kicking my ass to get me to update because I'm lazy lol.

http://sleepy-writer08.livejournal.com/6997.html

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