Summary: I can feel the brunette smirk against my collarbone, seemingly unaffected, but the way her hands tighten around my hips tells me that she wants me just as much as I want her. The way she pushes her body against mine as I drag my hands up and down her back, drawing aimlessly into her skin, makes damn sure I know it.
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Chapter Fifteen: If I had any doubts about finally giving in to Demi... )
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first of all, lemme go flop in the snow that's in my backyard.
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so that was amazing. I love how it just changed seamlessly; from sexy to tender, to a wonderful combination of both, it was just beautiful in the words of Demi.
I think what I love slightly more...is the fact that they aren't completely sure. The nerves are still there. I love how you didn't make it something they're both so sure about. It wasn't just hot and sexy....their was a pure quality there...
loved it. Wonderful job, Twinny.
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That was really hot!
I love how they tease each other and how sweet Demi is to Sel. And Selena not knowing exactly what to do was very cute!
Good job, Bia. Loved it.
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Congratulations again on all the good news lately.
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You just made my Monday. Not even kidding. I came home and was like *SIGH* but when I got on LJ and saw this I was like :DDDDDDD and *FLAIL*
How do I love this chapter? Let me count the ways.... For one thing, it was absolutely perfect. The entire story build up to this moment, and you held true to each of the character's personalities during this chapter, which is very impressive. Secondly, it was SO FUCKING HOT.
Those are only two of the reasons I love this chapter, but my brain short circuited, so I'll have to reread it a few more times to fully grasp it's awesomeness :D
I hope you get you laptop to work again soon so you can get back on skype! :D
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