another creation of onkey

[slickcaffeine]

Title: tell 'em how perfect we can be
Artist: slickcaffeine  
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: OnKey

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[slickcaffeine]

spot! deepintotaem <3

[deepintotaem]

Awwww ~ love this ♥

[slickcaffeine]

thankyouuu darling <3

[slickcaffeine]

spot ! belintuchiha finally give you this one <3

[belintuchiha]

asdfsdasdvf *spazzing bad*
YAY! I'VE GOT A SPOT! XD
and omg I love thissss, it's really a nice fanart, I admire your drawing skills!!
I wish I could do something lol im useless for thiss! ahaha
but aww I love onew's eye smile and key's tease glare XDDDDDDDD
I really like this ♥ *searches for like button*

[slickcaffeine]

oh my god you sweet puppy i love you x3

but baby, the one who have the tease glare is dubu, and the beautiful is keybum x3

bunch of thanks to you darling <333

[slickcaffeine]

spot! littlesirion hehe <3

[slickcaffeine]

thankyouu <3 yes, the one who being hugged is Jinki, with his predator eye lolols ~ what will they do ? the answer will make you die in happiness, darling hohoho >:D

tysm for commenting ! :*

[slickcaffeine]

spot! rinni1905 i wanna know your thought about this, onnie, really xD

[rinni1905]

The art is cute, and I really like it, but be aware of my critic since my bestie is major in art and I had to comment a lot of her arts. Keke. I don't know how you come up with this, the eyes are so mesmerizing, but I think he should possess a more hungry look in his eyes others than that predator gaze, which portrayed pretty well.

Wah, Jinki's broad shoulders!!! The position and the way Jinki held Kibum looked cute, but I need them to be a little tighter and more comfortable. The hands on Jinki's hair should have a little visible elbows on the side, according to their position and arms' length. Oh, it's indicated in psychology that when a person held somebody under the amprit, it means that they seek for protection, Kibum is trying to have Jinki's protection there? Jinki's face and arms' position showed how possessive he is, but I think you should add more wrinkle on where Jinki's hand is on Kibum's shirt. Oh gosh, long note! Anyway, I love this!

[slickcaffeine]

thankyou for every piece of your advice unnie ! xD i will try more harder yosh ! >:)) thank you for loved it :D

ily <3

[lovegrapefruit]

soooo cute <3333
I'm wondering if you will give me permission to share this on onkeyninja.tumblr.com ? ^^ I will link back to your LJ of course :DD

[slickcaffeine]

thank you <333

really ? of course i don't mind baby x3

[lovegrapefruit]

yaaay thankies ^0^ <333

[slickcaffeine]

OMGOSH you've posted it yes bb >< i often visiting your tumblr though i didn't have one coz their moments in your pages are epic <3

thank you very much again ! i feel like melting rn hehe ~~~