Rules of Spell [Poet]

[slickcaffeine]

Title: [Poet] Rules of Spell
Author: slickcaffeine
Pairing: Onew/Minho
Genre: AU, Fantasy (um... kinda.)
Rating: R (i don't even know, actually.)
A/N: First attempt to OnHo :D highly inspired by this song .

Comments

[usakpopluvr]

wahhhhh i really this it werid the words to with the beat of the song i fucking loves ittttt the story sounds like a harsh love story but i dont get how that could be r but whateves you veiewpoint is diff the mines but you should check out nmy post thingy i am trying to start a new story and i realllllly needs me some love right about NOWW!

[slickcaffeine]

oww i'm glad if you love it ! yes, i actually don't even know why i put the 'R' rate to this but seems it goes by these way, um... it was little bit hard to explain, but person who pov-ing this, minho or onew (up to you to think, as example, i'd like to take Onew, yes ? :D) like tempted by the charm of his admirer, Minho, who come to him to take his advantage, then leave him with no explain, like that :/ this was just poppin out of my mind immediately so ... idek >< (but actually Minho decide to do that cause he do admire Onew hehe ^^)

anyway i don't really get your mean about 'post thingy' dear, mind to explain for me ? i'm so kind of blank, yeah surry '_'

thank you for the cherish respond baby ! bunch of love to you :))

[usakpopluvr]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~ srry i can gets sorta confusing at times i menat i made a post on the 9th and i wanted sum mfeed abck cuz this is my first story but i dk why i amde it a smutt and i was wondering wiether i should continue or not and any pointer taht you may has for messssssss thankz and i hopes ya comment and just 2 lets you know i act like a am freakin adorable in my comments but that jus how i types and i migh m ihg taccdidently put in into my storiess but thankx gor the lovee!

[slickcaffeine]

oh you mean you've made a post and want to be commented ? i'm gonna be the one of it, sure ^^ where did i can read the fic ? :)

[tofubi]

been reading some of your fanfic and you've got creative ideas, seriously
please be sure tht im teling this to help you, and not to bring you down or somethng, i thnk you really should work on your grammar, because i cant understand the most part of your fic, and its such a turn-off when you hv good plots etc etc

or you could ask for a beta reader, because i really like your onkey fic, but never really get to finish them, cause well, i cant understand them, so yeah, dont hate me for this, but you're free to do so though
ermmm okay i'll disappear now