IN WHICH I WHINE

[slightly_anemic]

Okay, I've been having some ~issues~ with my characters lately, and I have decided to stick them here in the hopes that writing them down will somehow help. I guess this is sort of a drop meme/state of the union thing? I don't know, I'm not following any particular model here, I'm just getting my thoughts out.

Comments

[slashing_canon]

DRIVE BY TO SAY I THINK YOU'RE DOING FINE WITH NARUMI. I think you have his attitude, if not the slang perfect (and I do think that's something you could improve with practice and research and a lot of intentional placement...which would be slow-going at first, but you'd get the hang of it eventually)

And to be completely honest, every time Narumi was slangy in game, it felt a little off to me, too. He never did it consistently enough that I got used to him doing it, anyway. So IDK? BUT I really do like what you're doing with him <3

[lazy_detective]

Thank you! ♥ I'm glad you think so. And yeah, I'm working on the research and intentional placement thing, so hopefully that will work out.