Marshmallows

[sliverly]

I thought the two could use some fluff. The scene was inspired by a part in So Long and Thanks for All the Fish. It just seemed like something Byakuran would do to Shouichi. Possibly OOC though, I realize my ideas are not always on the money.

Title: Marshmallows
Genre: Fluff
Word Count: 1390
Pairing: 10051
Universe: University!era canon
Warnings:

Comments

[antireality]

O-Ohmygod. I love this. So much xD

And you're right. It definitely feels like something Byakuran would do :P

[sliverly]

Thank you muchly~

(Also, your icon is adorable!)

[turtlelikelemon]

awww..that was adorable..hehe
i just love stories in their university era..

btw.if you don't mind.
where did you get you layout for LJ?
its really cool :)

[sliverly]

Thank you~ Their time at the university is an era that needs to be explored, that's for sure.

And this is just a standard layout on LJ, I forget what it's called, sorry. But just poke around and I'm sure you can find it.

[turtlelikelemon]

thanks! :)/hugs

[trisianna]

I've recently just gotten into the pairing and this was such a sweet way of starting.

Byakuran semi-molesting Shou-chan. The world was meant to be like that u.u

On a more serious note, I totally enjoyed your writing style! The pace is great as well.

<3

[sliverly]

Thank you~

That was a new(ish) style for me, I'm glad it wasn't absolute fail. ^^

[caffeinexsugar]

I don't know why I haven't read this till now but this is awesome. Fantastic. Precious. Sweet. Cute. And everything else!

Both Byakuran and Shouichi is so IC that I can almost see this happening in the canon. And it's so cute. I said that already but it's so cute that it makes me smile like an idiot and read it again and smile like an idiot again...

Thanks for ANOTHER wonderful 10051 fic! (Although it seems to be a bit late for me to say that)

[sliverly]

^_^ Thank you~ It's always nice to hear~ I'm glad they seem IC, in case you haven't noticed, that's always my biggest fear. I'm so afraid Byakuran is way out of left field, Shouichi not as much but there are days, and certain fics, where I don't feel like he's right.

Fluff is my very favorite~ Even if it's cheesy~

Fluff us my favorite, too!

[caffeinexsugar]

And "cheesy" is an invention of evil critics who want to ruin ordinary people's fun and to make us by expensive boring books XD

Forgive me to say that it strikes me a bit funny that you always fear that your characters might be OOC, because you're one of the writers who write most believable Shouichi and Byakuran in my opinion. (I admit that I may be biased, because my understanding of these characters are very similar to yours. For example, too adultish, all sinister, sadist-to-the-bone Byakuran is OOC to me.) But I guess you can right them IC because you think about it.

Re: Fluff us my favorite, too!

[sliverly]

:D Awesome~ I'm really happy to be counted among the top IC writers for 10051. (I am totally okay with bias! Maybe it means we're on the right track?)

Though, if it's not OOC-ness I need to worry about, what would say my weakest area is? I want to improve and to do that I could use some pointers...

[turtlelikelemon]

HAHAHAHA! This is total Fluff alright! ♥
What a way to meet each other. XD