Nella Tentazione: Chapter One

[sliverly]

Title: Nella Tentazione
Genre: Romance; Porn
Word Count: 3434 + [Omake]{102}
Pairing: 10051
Universe: Alternate, High School
Warnings: Bad porn. Semi-noncon-ish if you're really squicky? Plot stolen from Love is Like a Hurricane
Rating: NC-17

Comments

[sliverly]

I'm glad at least one person likes it! Makes it all worth while, I'd say! ^^

I have to admit, the scenes without Byakuran are slow going, but the ones with him are really fun to write~ Hopefully he's actually IC, and can stay that way.

Yes you really need to write something! We need a counter-angst movement stat! Carve out some time! My lame writing is not enough!

[animaven]

Knew Japan had fast trains, but the action is even better. I really like the way this is going, and hope you continue, cause who doesn't like a little action before school.

[sliverly]

Thanks! ^_^ Ha ha, it seems Shou-chan isn't so sure about it, but Byakuran certainly wants some.

I feel like such a perv!

[shinigami39]

AAAAH I ONLY SAW THIS NOW, WHYYYY. /curses my blind eyes

I'll be nice and not read this that at work ahahaha. So expect a flaily-fangirly review in a few hours? XDDDD

♥♥♥

(The reveals are out in the byakushou comm! You're totally a lifesaver ♥♥♥)

[sliverly]

It's fine! Really, not all that great, you aren't missing much. (Though there are a few glaring mistakes that I can't fix without fucking up the formatting(the little bit there is) so please ignore those! ;_;)

I saw, and found that I guessed a couple identities correctly, huzzah. I felt...weird about commenting so I just didn't. It's really stupid, but I felt bad since I didn't contribute? Something that? Like I was barging in uninvited. XD It's retarded, but so am I. *shrug* It's why I rarely comment in anything. is lame

[yashirin]

waaaaaahhh!!!! I can't believe I just read this now~!! ((though that's probably because I just fot into KHR this may)) kyaaa~!! i love fics like this~!! not too serious but fun too read and it's school life~!! school is such a wide place~!! XDD

[turtlelikelemon]

GOD FINALLY I HAD THE TIME TO READ THIS AND THANK GOD I DID!!

*A*

This is so out of this world awesome!!!\o/
Can't wait to get to the next chapter! nnngnngghh! So excited!!

I never thought molestation could be this good. XD