Fic: First Date Part 2

Sep 18, 2011 17:38

Title: First Date
Fandom: CW/ RPS and SPN
Genre: It's a little bit of everything
Rating: R
Warnings: oh boy, let me see... boys kissing, boys humping each other, boys being tied up, some het, pre-incest, mentions of past drug use, mentions of past depression, character death, mental illnesses of some sort, aliens, cursing, innuendo... i think that's it ( Read more... )

rps, fic, jared, j2, spn, cw, slash, dean, im so excited, wincest, sam, jensen

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slothy_girl September 21 2011, 19:05:22 UTC
You're welcome hon!!!!!!And thank you so much for your prompt and kind words :D I felt terrible that it took so long to get up- but now im so relieved! lol

Im so happy you liked it! And lookie! I even wrote a pree Wincest fic for chu :D Which i said i wouldnt cuz ive never written Sam and Dean, but I did for you!!!! heee :3

*hugs*

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slothy_girl September 28 2011, 19:58:48 UTC
THANK YOU SO MUCH BB

Really? haha- can you believe that's the first time i've ever written Sam and Dean period?? Agh- i just hope it's not too sappy and OCC XP

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theoriginal_ist October 2 2011, 17:42:07 UTC
Why hello there, look who has time to finally READ something not written centuries ago. >_>

THESE WERE SO LOVELY. I'm trying to think of which one is my favorite and I don't know. Probably the Sam and Dean one. It was just adorable and lovely. The one with Mischa made me LOL.

And the final one was like...omg crazy. I didn't expect that at first, not until Jared brought the Tylenol and fed it to him instead of untying him to take it...that one was creepy. :(

But the park one was hilariously good, with the skating and tripping on air and public indecency. So was the alien one. "You should paint some pictures..." ::snickers:: It kind of reminded me of Ziva on NCIS mixing up sayings and stuff.

ANYWAY. All were lovely and different and really original. I'm glad I finally got time to read them. :D

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slothy_girl October 2 2011, 19:01:58 UTC
Oh my! Look at you go :3

haha im so glad you liked it :)

Haha yeah- i discussed it with a couple people and they said having something that didnt turn out quite right would give the story a better impact- I already had it written but they were the ones who convinced me to put it at the end instead of in the middle like i had planned XD

Im so very happy you liked them! Definately worth wait yeah???

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theoriginal_ist October 2 2011, 19:31:26 UTC
Haha, yes, and now I go back to French Renaissance Literature and cry over my laptop...

I loooooooooooooved them.

Mmhm. It being at the end was really good. It added a punch like "whaaaaaaaaaat?!?" lol.

Totally. So...what's next? Lol.

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slothy_girl October 3 2011, 01:04:13 UTC
awww- no crying bb!!!

:DDDDDDDD

haha good!

no idea lol- maybe trying to get warm? its like 60 degrees in my house right now D:

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amethystgrey October 14 2011, 06:38:58 UTC
Ohhh you weren't kidding about ending it with a bam. I'm sorry I took this long to read part 2, but ooohh nelly. Totally FREAKED me out. You lulled me into a false sense of security lol!

Alien-Jensen rocked haha. At first I thought Jared was freaked out because he was dating an alien and then it was like awww, he was scared that their relationship won't last. <3 Also, I liked the third person POV, that was cool :)

THis was probably my favourite scene :DDD
Jared bites his lip and palms Jensen’s collar distractedly. “This isn’t too fast right?”

Jensen swallows thickly and clears his throat, using the hold he’s got on Jared hips to drag him closer. “No. No, of course not.”

“You’ll still respect me later?” It’s teasing, but Jared’s got a vulnerable edge curling in the corner of his mouth, like he feels like he can’t have this, almost self-deprecating if Jensen ever saw one.

“Dude, I don’t think I’ve ever respected anyone more.”

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slothy_girl October 14 2011, 10:59:20 UTC
*swoon* aw thank you so much bb!!! Haha- yeah ;) Im evil, lulling people into false senses of security and then ripping it all away buahahahaha

Lol yeah :D That's exactly how i planned it to be :)

Heeeeeeeeee :3

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