I'm going to bold every sentence with only one clause/ every 'simple' sentence
Yesterday John and I went to Northern. It was fun. I liked seeing the school.
Today I got a computer. 12 inch Powerbook G4 (yes, like John's). Apple is taking over the world. And a printer, and a purse/bag to carry it in.
We're at Amy's now. We just got back from Jewel. We played "we'll eat what you buy, if you eat what we buy." Vince and Rob ate Spam, with chocolate milk. John, Amy, and I had to eat pearlized onions raw with Code Red. I sorta threw up the onions. They didn't even make it down before they came back up.(I'm not sure about this one.) Gross. Now vince wants to see the computer, so adios.
The point of this, I don't know. It's just a trend I see in your writing that makes your journal very hard too read.
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Yesterday John and I went to Northern. It was fun. I liked seeing the school.
Today I got a computer. 12 inch Powerbook G4 (yes, like John's). Apple is taking over the world. And a printer, and a purse/bag to carry it in.
We're at Amy's now. We just got back from Jewel. We played "we'll eat what you buy, if you eat what we buy." Vince and Rob ate Spam, with chocolate milk. John, Amy, and I had to eat pearlized onions raw with Code Red. I sorta threw up the onions. They didn't even make it down before they came back up.(I'm not sure about this one.) Gross. Now vince wants to see the computer, so adios.
The point of this, I don't know. It's just a trend I see in your writing that makes your journal very hard too read.
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