Comments | slowevolution: In Dreams. Inevitability and Ten Seconds.

slowevolution

In Dreams. Inevitability and Ten Seconds.

Jan 16, 2011 03:25

The following is my first attempt at joining Naruto fandom as something more than a lurker. SasuNaru is my drug of choice so that what these reflect. I apologize if it's not your cup of tea. I further apologize if this rapes peoples F-List as I intend to cross post it in various comms. I've never had an audience larger than two when it comes to my ( Read more... )

shippuden, fic, naruto, sasunaru, in dreams

Comments 9

blossomdreams January 16 2011, 16:37:31 UTC

This is good. I like the beginning and the concept. It sums up their relationship well I believe. Good job ^^.

slowevolution January 16 2011, 17:00:37 UTC

Thank you very very much. I am hoping very much that it will not remain just a beginning. I sort of have a track record for abandoning ficcy, but that usually comes from lack of an audience. I've never been the sort of writer that can just write for themselves.

It helps alot that you took the time to drop a line.

I think that in the next part/parts I'd like to try to have more Sasuke. I am trying to do my research.

blossomdreams January 16 2011, 17:05:38 UTC

^^ you're welcome I understand not going back to stories. My hard drive and notebook is riddled with them. I'm kind of the same I write for me and an audience, but it always feels good when someone reviews.

No problem support is useful and helpful. ^^

Sounds good can't wait to see it.

kiss_me_cait23 January 16 2011, 19:38:05 UTC

Oh, this is good. I'm a huge fan of flash-fiction like this, and even if it never becomes more than a beginning, it's a wonderful glimpse at the relationship. Gorgeous, and I'll keep an eye out for more.

slowevolution January 16 2011, 19:48:16 UTC

Thank you for the encouraging words. Pity I'm on my way out. What with the feedback I am very excited to continue. Something about the way that Sasuke and Naruto interact as if they'd never fallen out of touch begs for exploration.

kiss_me_cait23 January 16 2011, 20:28:43 UTC

Oh god, yeah. This is one of the most painful OTPs in any fandom, but so worth it. I'm looking forward to more of this!

illusionsofhate January 18 2011, 03:33:56 UTC

I love it. It's so well written that it takes me to the very spot the crazy boys are. I can't wait for more! Sexy dreams for all.

spiral_loki January 18 2011, 15:04:44 UTC

different! formattic and post modern, pulled off when it's done by a skilled writer.

a very interesting read :)

slowevolution January 18 2011, 15:34:12 UTC

Thank you. The structure wasn't really an intentional thing, but I suck at whipping fic into shape. I usually have to make due with whatever lands on the page.

I want so badly to continue this, but I open up notepad and nothing makes sense. Here's hoping it'll all come back to me as I'm very grateful for the feedback.