this is amazing, and heartbreaking and incredibly, incredibly moving. there is this... lostness in it, or just, the way it is, it's just so, you know it tugs at heartstrings because I don't know, I just read it and I wanted to do more.
ps I saw this first when I was pressed for time and couldn't read it right away and I was SO AFRAID you were going to delete it and basically I am so glad it is still here, it's just amazing powerful.
I wrote it from the point of view of the girl's little brother, and I'm glad the lost emotions translate. That was what I wanted. A sort of bewilderment. Thank you for always having something to say.
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ps I saw this first when I was pressed for time and couldn't read it right away and I was SO AFRAID you were going to delete it and basically I am so glad it is still here, it's just amazing powerful.
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