Going Home-Message number 15 was a heartbreaker.

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So this is a Breyton fic, because I think they've got chemistry like no other couple on that show, including one of my all time favorites Naley!!!! Also this is somewhat AU. I'll stick to what happened mostly in season's 1-4, but then I veer off and do my own thing.

Oh and I don't own anything but a chubby miniature dog that's so fat it looks like

Comments

[keinlurker]

Enjoyed the story and hope you will write more. Liked the friendship with Haley. Think I see some angst coming...

It´s a keeper,

[wildb9arsgalore]

if you ask me. I think it´s well-written, and you´re obviously setting a plausible pace for us to come to know the characters and their motivations. I especially like the fact that it´s about Brooke needing to go for it, and the connection for her between reclaiming herself and facing a difficult path with Peyton. I hope you´ll keep writing, because it´s interesting and it could be really good.

[queer_eulogy]

Okay, you seriously need to continue this. No joke. This is just too good of a storyline to let go. Plus, you got me wanting to see some flashbacks. Back to when Brooke kissed her because you seriously just can't leave us, leave me hanging like that.

And this line? "And now she's getting married to broody fucking Lucas. Who's poor and lives in his mother's old house writing books about crows and crap like that." Yeah, it made me choke on my water. :D