[fic] Slow Decay | Chapter Three
Title: Slow Decay
Pairing: Brian/Zacky; slight Brian/Jimmy
Rated: NC-17
Warnings: Mentions of Jimmy's death, AU, violence
Summary: Sometimes it's a little more complex than Until death do we part.
Disclaimer: Fake. Not Real. What a Shame. Disclaimed.
A/N: I KNOW I'M TERRIBLE FORGIVE ME. I've been trying really hard to write this but the inspiration ( Read more... )
Pairing: Brian/Zacky; slight Brian/Jimmy
Rated: NC-17
Warnings: Mentions of Jimmy's death, AU, violence
Summary: Sometimes it's a little more complex than Until death do we part.
Disclaimer: Fake. Not Real. What a Shame. Disclaimed.
A/N: I KNOW I'M TERRIBLE FORGIVE ME. I've been trying really hard to write this but the inspiration ( Read more... )
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I feel so sorry for the poor Zack... But glad that Brian finally realized what that Zack is trying to help him. I loved the scene with the rain gently tapping on the windows and the two of them enjoying a nice moment :) But again ,the nightmare was... let's say, no for the faint-hearted. And the real wound... You just gave me the chills!
Can't wait to read more. And wow! You managed to write this much only on your iPhone? My fingers hurt every time i write a text :D I like the laptop more.
Great chapter! ^^
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I've always loved writing sort of horrific scenes so I'm having probably more fun with those nightmares than I should be :| lol But I'm glad you're over all enjoying it!
I've had an iPod Touch and then an iPhone for around 2 or 3 years (I'm bad at keeping track of time) so I'm really used to writing on them. Plus I just turn it sideways, expands the keyboard and makes typing easier. Though it is still much easier and faster to type on a laptop lol.
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Don't the passengers near you want to take a peak? I know I would if I saw someone typing as crazy on their phone :D
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I think some of them do but the screen is too small to really get anything good from it. Plus I try to sit alone as often as I can xD
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I don't even know what to say or how to even go about explaining how amazing this was. First off, I'm kinda pissed with Matthew right now. Seriously, dude? It's Zack, he of all people wouldn't do that to Brian, you should know this Mattie. I oughta pop him upside the head for even suggesting that Zack would do this for his own intent. -_-
I feel like I'm about to quote a lot, but...
It was silent in the house save for the low murmur of some old and obscure movie playing on the tv and the light pitter patter of rain on the windows. Zack was stretched out on the couch, tucked into the corner between the back rest and the arm. Brian was lying between his legs, using the arm of the couch as a pillow. That is perfect. I can see that so vividly and that's one of my favorite things about your writing, your descriptions always paint a picture in my mind and that one just made my ( ... )
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I'm glad I can make you awww at the right parts and get chills in the other parts. Seriosuly, big grin on my face right now to know I've gotten whats in my head out there and people are totally getting it.
And not to worry! All will be explained soon! I have it planned! I just need to...you know...write it xD
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But, uh. Yeah. I really like this, and I can't wait for the next chapter =]
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