that's what i have started, any help with it?

[sluglord]

that look of disgrace
judging by the broken lines on your face
you're not a friend
it's me in the mirror
so many broken lines make you disappear
it's the only defense
maybe
it's not me
maybe
a daydream
it's not the face i wanted
to mother
to father
to the morning star
that's it! the face i wanted
that's it!
that't the face i wanted