Life

Oct 18, 2004 20:20

My eyelids raise,
And I see her face,
And I meet her gaze.
My sleep draws on apace.I wrote this for my Psychology assignment. It's a short poem, which I think, effectively illustrates the brevity and wonder of life. One is born, one sets a goal, one meets the goal, one dies. The rhyming is representative of the beauty that can be found in life, ( Read more... )

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crzyblacksheep October 19 2004, 04:15:23 UTC
that is a beautiful poem Mark. short..but it says ALOT.

im jealous. you've always been a wonderful writer.

love,
Ilana

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choaticthinker October 19 2004, 06:34:28 UTC
SWEEEEEEEEEEEETS.

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choaticthinker October 19 2004, 06:34:52 UTC
I wanna see what hardaman says about it tomorrow

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