Longest sentence ever

[slydemonatrix]

OK, so I had to do this assignment, based on a Proust passage we read in a class. It was a three page grammatically correct sentence, and we had to then create our own, so, with no further ado and the greatest of pleasure, I give you mine:

Creepy and forboding, the facade marked by blackened, cracked windows- or window panes, the glass broken on

Comments

Lost

[jonsaint]

Okay! Okay! I admire with your effort but I am lost.

Re: Lost

[slydemonatrix]

its not hard to get, you read it the first time for the effect, but if you go back through and read it without the inserts, without the stuff in parenthesis and in commas and dashes, its fairly straightforward. In a house where its dark and creepy there is a creature that kills and in the end you realize that it is in fact not a creature but simply a woman scorned. Its actually grammatically correct.

smart

[jonsaint]

That is smart. I might it sometimes.