FIC: Distractions by Prentice (Iron Man; PG) Tony/Jarvis

Sep 06, 2010 01:36

I have no idea why I wrote this. No, really. No idea. That said, I can't believe I don't have an Iron Man icon. That's just...not right. I need to rectify it. Soon.

Title: Distractions.
Author: Prentice
Fandom: Iron Man
Pairing: Jarvis/Tony
Disclaimer: I don't own it, but if I did, something like this would have probably happened.
Spoilers: This is set ( Read more... )

iron man, tony/jarvis, fic

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Comments 19

silverwolf September 6 2010, 22:24:52 UTC
Excellent. The style, the dialogue, everything.

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slyprentice September 9 2010, 01:51:47 UTC
Thank you! :)

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okami_oujou September 10 2010, 18:36:34 UTC
Wonderful story - I enjoyed it immensely. &hearts
Would you mind if I recced it at #TonyJarvis?

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slyprentice September 10 2010, 19:26:22 UTC
I wouldn't mind at all. Thank you! :)

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anonymiss731 September 15 2010, 04:47:25 UTC
Excellent writing. Normally I'd want to stab somebody for using parenthesis but you made it work with the consistency in the formatting and the shifts in the paragraphs. Outside of my nerdy formatting love, I love the plot and dialog too. The snippy funny banter between the two of them is great.

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slyprentice September 16 2010, 19:25:52 UTC
I'm glad the parenthesis worked for you, at least in the case. Thank you for the kind words! :)

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nautilusl2 November 26 2011, 04:16:11 UTC
I found this on a rec page and I gotta say this has been a pleasure to read! My first Jarvis story and it's touching and lovely. Awesome, awesome, awesome.

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slyprentice November 28 2011, 02:59:46 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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chelz710 June 3 2012, 16:27:35 UTC
right in the feels ;__;

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