Fic: Tennisslash: Fevered, For Crys' BDay!; Ficlet: Sloth

[slyreflection]

Title: Fevered
Characters: Mario Ancic, Juan Carlos Ferrero, Marat Safin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Angst, some smut, some misplaced crack.
Summary: Mario learns: in reality, a dream is just a memory corrupted by a fantasy.
Author's Note: For crystaleyesd , Happy Birthday Crys! This is what you get for requesting angst, AND crack, AND smut, AND Mario/Juanqui/Marat!!!

Comments

[_runningmascara]

Loved the feeling, the tone of Fevered. you totally killed it with ending, awesome :)

*pets Tommy* i really liked Sloth too!

[slyreflection]

:D Thanks, I'm really glad the tone and ending of Fevered worked for you, its great to see that the twist made sense ^____^!

Heh heh, yeah I abused him a little in that fic, but I figured it wasn't worse than most other fics XD. Thanks for reading and commenting!! I really appreciate it. :)

[elizaberglund]

The things we do for love:
1)Grovel
2)Serve breakfast in bed
3)Allow ourselves to be ordered around like servants

sooooooooooo true!!!!!! I love it:) your fic is just great:)
I particulary liked this :
"the lump curled up under the bedcovers that is Marat" -sounds cosy, doesn't it? I'd kill for such lump :P

[slyreflection]

Thank you, it's great to see people enjoying my fic :D
Lol, Maratlove is something quite... let's say warm XD.
Thanks for the feedback! :)

[jeu_set_match]

HAPPYFACE!!!!!!

OTP T________T

Ahhhh so sweet and domestic and lazy and OTP X3
I loved the idea and I love you <3

[slyreflection]

XD
Ahaha, yay, happyface!

OTP <3 <3 <3.

*Grins* I cant imagine sweet and domestic OTP without lazy OTP as well XD.
Awww thank you Jeu, ILU TOO!!
*SUPERHUGS*

[slyreflection]

Thanks gordie <3!
I will try lol!

[krisherdown]

Now that I have seen these three together, it seems to make perfect sense.

The question really is, which trio is better. I loved the ending to Sloth, them lazy bastards :)

Damn mono screwing up the mind and the last bit, so true.

[slyreflection]

It's great that it makes sense to you, I have to admit I'm a little lost XD.
Are you suggesting Juanqui/Marat/Tommy? XD

Hmmm... I suppose that does have possibilities...

Anyway, thanks for the review :D. Yeah, I don't see why they should stop being lazy bastards when they're in love XD. Besides, it's part of their, erm, charm ahaha.
*Hugs!*

[krisherdown]

Actually, yes, I was suggesting Juanqui/Marat/Tommy. Even though the first fic is the hotter story, the second one just really made me wonder why Tommy is in that room "not remembering".

Then again, Mario does little for me whereas Tommy/anyone-other-than-Fishie I will read. Yes, I realize at tennis_crack that's practically sacriligious, but unless that boy is being mindfucked by Marat, mono, or Goran, I just don't care.

[slyreflection]

Ohhhh... good point... I felt some vibes there when I looked over the story but my problem was that if Tommy didn't have his own boyfriend he was doting on, the whole comparison would be kinda pointless XD. I guess he could cheat but it'd be a little mean lolololol.
Huh, it could happen. Might be stretching it a bit what with Juanqui-Tommy dynamic is pratically nonexistent, but I guess if Juanqui/Tommy/Tommy can exist in my head anything is possible XD.
Ahahaha Kris you crack me up... eh, I've grown used to Mario but he's actually not really one of my favorites either... Ive sort of adopted him, I guess XD. Besides, he does the getting mindfucked and the angst like a natural lmao!