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Fanfic: In Our Hands - Chlollie

Dec 31, 2010 17:30

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rating: nc-17, fanfiction, ship: chlollie, fanfic: in our hands, fanfics, rating: m, pairing: chloe/oliver

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niffer2001 January 1 2011, 01:23:05 UTC

No! Where's the rest? I know you are not going to be so mean to leave it there. LOL! Love this story! On the edge of my seat wondering the reason for Chloe's disappearance...memory loss, blackmail, alien abduction?

tory_jhay88 January 1 2011, 02:29:18 UTC

Oh my god! I just kept repeating the phrase at the end of this chapter. Truly need to get the next one! this was amazing. I like the fact that Hal is trying to get to know Chloe through Oliver. Loved that Victor gave him a talking to about her. More soon please!!!!

amazing_07 January 1 2011, 02:43:40 UTC

Ok, that was just mean. Mean and awesome! But still mean... I can't wait for Chloe-Oliver face-to-face!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jediyoda99 January 1 2011, 06:02:43 UTC

You know when Oliver was talking about Chloe wistfully, I kept asking myself what if he found her soon after their conversation. And there it is, at the end of the chapter.,

I felt sorry for Oliver, he is clearly still in love with Chloe but he is holding back and trying to shut his heart when its trying not to be shut up. Glad to see that Chloe has been found,I would love to hear her explanation and for Hal to see the woman that oliver feel in love with

lilyeth January 1 2011, 06:22:38 UTC

Very good chapter, I like how Hal make Ollie talked about how everything started with Chloe, that way he can try to "understand" her better.

And Victor found them, yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really want to know what make Chloe leave everything behind her and not come back, it must be something very powerful to make her to keep to herself the fact that she has Oliver´s kid.

Hope that you updated very soon, happy new year!!!!!!!!!