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gwen589 January 6 2011, 02:28:39 UTC
Ahhhh!!! So Tense!

So, when Chloe left with their child because she saw Oliver 'leaving' does that mean, leave as in 'broke up and left' or 'Oliver died left?' I have to think it's more tragic because I don't think Oliver would willingly leave Chloe and baby if he knew...

And Conner saying the Green Arrow is his dad, does that mean he knows Green Arrow is his dad but doesn't know the man behind the mask?

So many questions! I guess I'll have to wait to find out.

Chloe and Oliver finally met! (Though, a part of me is taking Oliver's side.)

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ihearttvsnark January 6 2011, 02:30:53 UTC
*speechless ( ... )

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iluvaqt January 6 2011, 02:33:05 UTC
Oh my, I so didn't see that coming! And what a way for Chloe to tell him the truth without actually giving her heart away, reliving the pain. You can admire and even love a hero because in that way it explains why they can't be part of your life, you're a vulnerable point for them. They can't do their jobs properly and protect you. He's safer remaining unacknowledged.

“He’s my number one hero-Right above Batman.”

This made me grin even before I read the end. He admires heroes for the same reason anyone who really thought about the sacrifices involved. Batman and Green Arrow are just men. No super powers, abilities, just pure determination and finely honed skills.

Their reunion went as poignantly as I expected, You had just the right amount of anger and hurt from both sides. And Connor's skepticism and observations are exactly what I thought coming from Oliver and Chloe's combined intelligence and keen observation.

Fantastic update.

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nayad05 January 6 2011, 02:43:58 UTC
OMG :)
Very good job, i like it.
This story is beautiful.
Chloe and Oliver reunion so tense, i like it.
Thanks.

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abarbiestory January 6 2011, 02:44:09 UTC
WHAT!!!!!!!---> "he's my father"---> I was hoping that chloe told him who is father was but in my head she told him that Oliver Queen was his father, but this is beyond great!!!!!

I think you guys handled their conversation very well. I would be pissed as chloe too, if someone threatened to tae away my kid. But I also understand Oliver's need to hurt her in the smallest of ways(even if he never planned to, not that that is small but still)

I really like Connor! I'm guessing that Chloe was truthful up until "Oliver is your dad" with him. He has to know that he and him mom could be in danger...or something

Anyways you guys rocked my socks off and I can't wait for Chlollie to really sit down and have conversation so she can explain what she saw that scared her so much! I mean it has to be a bomb reason to stay away so long!

Great job I'm totally going to read it again before bed!

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