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Fanfic: In Our Hands - Chlollie

Feb 06, 2011 15:30

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fanfiction, ship: chlollie, fanfic: in our hands, fanfics, pairing: chloe/oliver, rating: nc-17, fandom: smallville, rating: m

Comments 22

sunnytyler001 February 6 2011, 20:57:39 UTC

XD Connor is so smart! It's going to be difficult to hide him the truth longer!

ihearttvsnark February 6 2011, 20:59:05 UTC

*speechless ( ... )

Great chapter ext_393449 February 6 2011, 21:43:18 UTC

"They are not tights" both at the same time. It´s very funny. I love how you develop the story. Thanks for a great chapter.

gabrielladusult February 6 2011, 21:48:16 UTC

Five words, Oliver, "I broke up with Dinah." Say them...and if Chloe lets herself believe that, try four more: "I still love you!" Then kiss her silly.

And Chloe -- how could you think Oliver was pretending? You silly, messed up girl.

Which is to say, I love this, the UST (as long as it's RST by the end of the story) and Connor's suspicious looks and clever remarks. Keep it up!

abarbiestory February 6 2011, 22:03:04 UTC

I have to go back to studying so this will be super quick...

This Chapter was BADASS!!!! not in the kick-ass crime fighting badass but well written, emotional charger, in character, bomb plot kind of BADASS!!!!

you guys out did yourselves with this chapter form small moments like robin hood to moments where Con was picking up Every single thing that was going on btw them!!

I know if Conner hasn't figured it out he will soon!

great job lovelies!