Fanfic: In Our Hands - Chlollie

[slytherinpunk]

Comments

[insanityclings]

Aw I love this! I squeed when the sexual tension just got ratcheted up with all the touches and that intense hug. And I love the couch and Nick's mom telling them to tell Conner soon because that kid really is seconds from figuring it out on his own. I absolutely adored all the banter about abnormal height , it reminded me so much of what made them fall in love in the first place.

I can't wait for the next chapter!!

[genki_geek]

Thank you so much for this! I'm ecstatic that Chloe's finally loosing up somewhat and finally decided to tell Ollie the truth soon. I hope she has a VERY good reason for leaving because frankly, this is quite possibly the only fic I've read so far where I dislike Chloe :( Keep up the great work and am looking forward to the next installment! :)

[geek_or_unique]

This is my favorite chapter! I love everything about it, the sexual tension, they getting ready for the game. And I like the football part too, it looks real.
I can't barely wait for next week, this fic it's one of the highlights of the week.

[gabrielladusult]

OMG! This was so good. I kept thinking that they were awfully free with the 'our child' and 'he gets that from you' talk while the video tape was running...I'm not sure if making the DVD will solve that problem.

And Connor was off his game because his dad was watching, wasn't he? That was cute.

And Chloe still has no clue that Oliver wants the whole package, not just Conor...she's off her game too.

Can't wait for more.

[chloesilvers]

I just realized two things- one, that I've never reviewed this amazing story. I cannot believe that I haven't! Really great work ladies.

Two: didn't the video of Connor's game pick up on everything that Chloe and Oliver say to each other? So when they watch the video recording of the game, won't Connor find out?

I can't wait for the next chapter guys. Keep up the amazing work!!