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geek_or_unique February 27 2011, 21:36:47 UTC
You brighten my sundays! This was an amazing chapter. I love how normal and confortable with each other they are.
And I can't believe Chloe don't know yet he's single, you're torturing me. lol
Let's just jump to next week so I can read the next chapter!

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sweet_jesus1 February 27 2011, 21:43:28 UTC
I've never actually said it before but I hope you know I think it all the time. This story is just so...♥ that sometimes I can't write a comment because it wouldn't do it justice. But I love the progression between thus far for both Connor/Oliver and Chloe/Oliver. As when they were caught in that predicament, the tensions it just feels so natural between them like Oliver said *happy sighs* and KUDOS for not making it too awkward after even Chloe says he's come along way and Connor is starting to warm to him.

Adrian gosh how I love her.

Oliver/Connor playful was utterly adorable he's just like his dad and doesn't know it. I just want to say reading this fic brings out so many emotions in me and I love your writing to death. Superb chapter ♥ much love

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iluvaqt February 27 2011, 21:51:18 UTC
I'm always impressed by how you capture and portray the heart of a child, their fears, their desires, what they notice and how they react to different situations.

I loved the tickle confrontation but this Chloe pulling away from him all the time, is driving me crazy! Someone's got to come by to check on Oliver soon. Hal or Victor have to spill on where Oliver's gone, Lois or Clark have to find out and Chloe or Oliver's going to get a phone call.

Or she's gotta see a stray news coverage. They have to have League news or Tabloids in Germany. "Billionare wedding off" :D

So even if Chloe doesn't want to read or hear news, Nic's mum will find out.
I love this fic.

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ihearttvsnark February 27 2011, 22:11:10 UTC
You know, I remember you saying before you started posting this story that there was a lot of sexual tension...but seriously? You're killing me here ( ... )

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lali_lewicki February 27 2011, 22:26:28 UTC
*sighs* This fanfic always manages to turn me into a sappy mess. Oh, the horror! lol

I was wondering about what Chloe would do with the sound of the video, if she would be careless and Connor would see it, or if she would edit it. Connor is a cutie and I can't wait until he finds everything out.

You're doing a nice job with the progression of Connor's affection to Ollie. It feels very natural the way he's warming up to Oliver. At the same time, Oliver and Chloe are falling back into love, which is awesome.

Anyway, can't wait until next chapter! :D

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