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tadashee June 4 2011, 21:58:41 UTC
omg! i love this! i have always wanted to read fics with ollie's parents even if it maybe a mind warpish thing! awesome prologue!

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serafina19 June 4 2011, 22:12:14 UTC
Huh

I mean that as a question and a statement. Wheels are turning, wondering what rabbit hole you're taking us down, wondering what the heck is going on.

That being said, comparing the fiancee to a pet reptile... kind of genius.

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jessicaj703 June 4 2011, 22:23:15 UTC

This is an interesting start, though I must admit that I am completely confused. Not au, you say? :)

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iluvaqt June 4 2011, 23:43:31 UTC
Very intriguing introduction. Even more so considering the the AN that says this isn't an AU. Is someone impersonating his parents and taking advantage of the fact that they created his amnesia?

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Great start! greenteam4ever June 5 2011, 10:56:23 UTC
Whoa. I'm so intrigued here.
First of all I must say I LOVE the chapter!
The idea with his parents is amazing, but what makes me confused is the mention that it's not AU. So apparently somebody messes with Ollie's brain after some kind of accident, huh?
The analogy between his fiancee and a pet reptile totally rocks!ROFL I think the fact that he could not remember her speaks for itself - she doesn't matter A LOT to him. At least I want to think so ;)
Really can't wait where it takes us from here, `cos I have no idea what happens next, and I'd say it's awesome, I love surprising plots (surprising in a good way of course ;) )

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