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slytherinpunk

Fanfic: In Our Hands - Chlollie

Aug 14, 2011 17:59

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rating: nc-17, fanfiction, ship: chlollie, fandom: smallville, fanfics, rating: m, pairing: chloe/oliver

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552158 August 15 2011, 04:30:18 UTC

Wohoooo I am so glad. I've been checking every other day and I am so glad a new chapter is up :) It is great how you keep developing the storyline while still adding twists and turns. Looking forward to the next one :)

renka23 August 15 2011, 04:54:54 UTC

Oh yeay, finally! Been waiting for this since the last chapter. :D

This chapter is even more amazing than the last. I love how Chloe and Ollie just fit right back perfectly. Their interactions are so sweet and sincere it makes me go awww. <3

I'm also curious what Connor and Nick had planned. I also wonder if Connor's realizing Oliver is his father. Should be interesting to see what happens next! :>

Thanks for this and, as usual, your writing is amazing! :)

serafina19 August 15 2011, 04:59:46 UTC

Amazing as always! You combine some really touching moments in this chapter of all kinds. From sweet, to curious, to snarky, to shock to a psuedo-bittersweet, this one had it all, and that final passage was so well-done.

ica013 August 15 2011, 10:10:09 UTC

i've been hanging out for an update...and this was brillant (although part of me was half expecting a hissy fit from Connor when he saw Oliver come out of his mother's room) You also have me intrigued as to what the kids have posted on the internet.

greenteam4ever August 15 2011, 10:27:15 UTC

Thanks for the chapter, I was waiting for it! I wonder what it is that Connor asked Nick to post? Can't wait to find out! It was great that he asked Oliver to stay with him in a hospital, at least he likes him.
I absolutely love all of your Chlollie moments, so glad they are finally together and happy.
Hope you'll update soon, this chapter was awesome!