i was wondering what connor had done! I cant wait for the team to see chloe and connor. the bit with bart was perfect! i am really glad you wrote that! i cant beleive there are only 3 chapters left! so eventful!
I absolutely loved the update, and no worries on when. :) Whenever you can is fine, because I of all people understand how hectic things can get.
Oh Ollie, how you should have said those fateful words. Something makes me think Merlyn had the email traced and then managed to con Nick into giving him Connor's address by impersonating Green Arrow. :(
I love their conversations and knew that Connor had warmed to Oliver. I love how they spoke about him a little bit before they were interrupted. Wonderful interactions. I love even how you included Bart's feelings and disappointment over Chloe's actions. It showed how much he'd matured over the years to not burst in and demand an explanation, but focused on the mission at hand.
If you thought there was even a slight chance I'd be giving up on this story, you're insane. I love it way to much to ever give up on it.
It does suck that the new RTE still fails for you though... a couple glitches aside, mine seems to work okay. Then again... no graphics on my master fic list, which works to my advantage in this case. Worst case scenario... try copy/paste because I don't know if things are going to get better for past entries.
Onto the actual chapter... you just let my paranoia kick in again. How can you leave it there? Sure, I know it could be something other than the worst case scenario, because I have a stupid amount of theories right now... the problem is I'm not sure I like any of them.
At the beginning, the anxiety of both Chloe and Oliver was written so well that I could feel it throughout my body, which is crazy because I have no clue what they're going through. And their 'see-you-later' (because I trust you and I am not calling it a goodbye)... so good, but what really got me was the little
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I knew it! It would be cut off in this part and the next part, Arthur King kidnaps Connor. And from him, he would learn that Green Arrow and Oliver Queen are one and that he is his father. Lol. I am getting ahead here.
anyways, great update. Now, Connor has already a soft spot and yearning for Oliver. It so sweet when he asked how soon can Ollie come back. That is just so sweet. Now, its a two-week wait again for your update. Hope you can update soon :)
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Oh Ollie, how you should have said those fateful words. Something makes me think Merlyn had the email traced and then managed to con Nick into giving him Connor's address by impersonating Green Arrow. :(
I love their conversations and knew that Connor had warmed to Oliver. I love how they spoke about him a little bit before they were interrupted. Wonderful interactions. I love even how you included Bart's feelings and disappointment over Chloe's actions. It showed how much he'd matured over the years to not burst in and demand an explanation, but focused on the mission at hand.
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It does suck that the new RTE still fails for you though... a couple glitches aside, mine seems to work okay. Then again... no graphics on my master fic list, which works to my advantage in this case. Worst case scenario... try copy/paste because I don't know if things are going to get better for past entries.
Onto the actual chapter... you just let my paranoia kick in again. How can you leave it there? Sure, I know it could be something other than the worst case scenario, because I have a stupid amount of theories right now... the problem is I'm not sure I like any of them.
At the beginning, the anxiety of both Chloe and Oliver was written so well that I could feel it throughout my body, which is crazy because I have no clue what they're going through. And their 'see-you-later' (because I trust you and I am not calling it a goodbye)... so good, but what really got me was the little ( ... )
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Well done, Very well done!!!
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anyways, great update. Now, Connor has already a soft spot and yearning for Oliver. It so sweet when he asked how soon can Ollie come back. That is just so sweet. Now, its a two-week wait again for your update. Hope you can update soon :)
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