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tadashee November 30 2011, 06:55:31 UTC
OMG! cliff hanger! that little psycho is in germany already? I aam honestly scared for chloe and connor! As for mia's death- i completely agree with you. I never liked her. i thought it was a weird storyline and she was really awkward. maybe its just the chlollie fan in me, but i really wished that disciple would have been focused more on oliver realizing his feelings by dark archer telling him he had his friend and lover confused. *sigh* Anyways, sorry for getting sidetracked! i love the story and my favorite part was oliver's exasperation when clark called. haha. clark will never change.

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ica013 November 30 2011, 07:34:39 UTC
Glad to see you back posting. I like how this chapter is setting up the finale ones, although Clark you BDA, did your time away from earth teach you nothing!!!!!!!! Gotta luv Vic (and feel for Dinah, nothing like being targeted because of a ex you want to stay x'd)

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madlenita November 30 2011, 08:40:04 UTC
I am definitelly happy too that your laptop is back!!! Thanks for amazing chapter. So now ony 2 left? I can't wati for them...

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pompeypearly_v2 November 30 2011, 09:28:25 UTC
so glad that your computer issues have been resolved and that you have been able to write again.

Nice to see Clark acting like...well, Clark. At least he finally got to the real issue that Lois had more right than him, and should be speaking to Chloe first.

Really looking forward to the next installment - i have a real love/hate thing with cliffhangers!!

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chlollifan84 November 30 2011, 12:25:34 UTC
I am sooo happy that you're back. This update made my day better!
But now, I am really scared for Chloe and Connor. I guess the person who was ringing at Chloe's door at the end of the chapter 24 was Merlyn... This is not good news!
Can't wait to see the next chapter!

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