I really thought it was clever the way you explained the bad blood and the connection to the established SV history with Dark Archer/Vordigan.
Glad to have you back and for more to this fic. Hope that you got your laptop sorted.
Despite Clark being annoying, I did think the fact that he called and nagged was in character. Also bringing up Lois. While it was arm twisting, I know Chloe probably does need a bit of nudge because she's afraid and feeling guilty about meeting everyone again.
My thoughts at the end. I think he should be calling Clark back. Bart can get there quick and Hal can fly, but all of them are worn down. Clark will be able to get to her the fastest, and also possibly pick up a trail first.
Thank you for the update! This chapter wasn't boring at all to me. I'm glad that you're writing for this story again. I can't wait for the next chapter. More please!
I'm so glad you've updated! One day I was looking through your Master Fic List and re-reading some of the stories and then I woke up next morning to see that you've posted another chapter! :) Don't worry, I don't think it's boring. Although I missed Chlollie interaction. But I found out a lot of interesting facts from the chapter. And the ending - OMG he's in Germany! Connor is in danger! Chloe is in danger! Please, please,please update this soon!
I am sooo happy your laptop is back and I am sorry for any person issues you are suffering through and I hope they start to get a bit easier for you. Honestly though Ieven youth you state this was a boring chapter I actually found it to be one of my favorites because I think I am a sucker for transitions, that is the only explaination for it. I like the twist you did with the Dark Archer and I agree with you the Smallville version really wasn't dark enough to really be a villian...a huge nuisance and a lover of playing games but next to Lex he was still a child. My opinion mind you, so I really like what you have reaterd!
Your return has heralded back a happy dance mingled with a bit of duck dance, I was so excited to see you're back.up and running. Welcome back even if you've take a few hits of late you should see the return of the laptop and you're writing as turning point for better things to come for the future.
Personally I enjoyed this chapter it was good way to ease the Muse back and look forward to reading more thanks to the cliffhanger ending.
New chapter, this is so great.:D I love that story, is amazing. :D A cliff hanger.... is Merlyn in Germany, next to Chloe and Connor? Ollie will freak out, he can't loose them. I liked the dynamics of the boys, they are a great team. Great chapter. :)
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Glad to have you back and for more to this fic. Hope that you got your laptop sorted.
Despite Clark being annoying, I did think the fact that he called and nagged was in character. Also bringing up Lois. While it was arm twisting, I know Chloe probably does need a bit of nudge because she's afraid and feeling guilty about meeting everyone again.
My thoughts at the end. I think he should be calling Clark back. Bart can get there quick and Hal can fly, but all of them are worn down. Clark will be able to get to her the fastest, and also possibly pick up a trail first.
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Don't worry, I don't think it's boring. Although I missed Chlollie interaction. But I found out a lot of interesting facts from the chapter.
And the ending - OMG he's in Germany! Connor is in danger! Chloe is in danger! Please, please,please update this soon!
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Personally I enjoyed this chapter it was good way to ease the Muse back and look forward to reading more thanks to the cliffhanger ending.
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A cliff hanger.... is Merlyn in Germany, next to Chloe and Connor? Ollie will freak out, he can't loose them.
I liked the dynamics of the boys, they are a great team.
Great chapter. :)
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