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Destiny's Crossfire Chapter 15 Part 2

Aug 22, 2013 11:08

Title: Destiny's Crossfire
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered (15/20)
Genre: Angst, drama, Non-AU, bandfic, romance, post-lawsuit
Summary: Sometimes the only things that brings us together are the accidents that make up our worst nightmares.

A/N: THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS ADULT THEMES AND CONTENT. PLEASE, READ ONLY IF YOU CAN HANDLE IT. I ( Read more... )

bandfic, yunjae, destiny's crossfire, drama, angst, non-au, romance

Comments 30

donud August 22 2013, 15:21:34 UTC

fuck.. fuck.. fuck......

onewaytrackk August 22 2013, 15:57:07 UTC

OMG JAEJOONGIE.
TT. I kind of knew it would be something about JJ sacrificing himself but to actually read it ouch my heart aches for him.
Ah JJ you TT
Poor yoochun having to carry this secret all the years and not being to tell anyone. :(
Now that Yunho knows, I really hope everything will take a turn for the better TT

Thanks for the update!!

... mcarol85 August 22 2013, 16:05:41 UTC

I knew it

persecute the bastard.
castrate him.
do it. you are writer, you are god.

/evil aura ends here/

ok so yeah. i did know it was coming. and its a nice play on reality. rising sun time. i imagine dr may even have record of the extra 'injuries'. to make him pay. whoever it is.
and now they can heal? right? jaejoongie is strong.

thanks for writing

teddyrain August 22 2013, 16:15:09 UTC

Damn... all of the years... damn this is too much.
I'm hurt. I can felt all Yunho misery for not knowing.
Jaejae... Jaejae ottoke... I can't stop crying.

teddyrain August 23 2013, 06:21:06 UTC

Traumatized. After 12 hours reading this, I still can't believe it.
I saw it coming, I swear some of us already saw it.
But I denied it. I choose to believe that Jae hiding something else.
Seriously can't get all Yoochun's confession and Yunho reaction out of my head.
Well done author-ssi...

snow_meow August 22 2013, 16:21:16 UTC

The second of three revelations?
I don't think I can take the third one if it's worst than the first two.

Poor Jaejoong and Yoochun. The secret they both share.

I think I can understand now why Yoochun is so protective over Jaejoong and why he is so distance from Yunho. Yoochun is so protective because Jaejoong will do anything for Yunho even break his own heart.

I am sure why Yoochun is so distant from Yunho is because he blames Yunho. If Yunho had open his eyes and paid more attention to Jaejoong and his surroundings, he might have notice it and left together with Jaejoong...to protect Jaejoong. But Yunho staying is like a stab in the heart because all Jaejoong's efforts is nothing and in the same time, Jaejoong lost Yunho.