Destiny's Crossfire Chapter 16

Sep 19, 2013 14:30


Title: Destiny's Crossfire
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered (16/20)
Genre: Angst, drama, Non-AU, bandfic, romance, post-lawsuit
Summary: Sometimes the only things that brings us together are the accidents that make up our worst nightmares.


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CHAPTER 16 ENDING BECAUSE IT WOULDN'T FIT! smartcatt September 19 2013, 18:32:22 UTC
“Everything!” Yoochun put the heels of his palms to his temples, eyes rolling up to stare at the ceiling. “He knows everything! We found out everything. W-Who raped you…w-we-he found out everything…everything…Jaejoong-ah, you got to stop him! He went to see Loo Soo Man! He’s not thinking straight!” Yoochun coughed, choking on his own spit in his rush to get the words out. His fear for Yunho growing in its intensity as the seconds elapsed. “H-He-I don’t know what to do! He knows it’s Yun Dongjin and he just left to see Lee Soo Man! He wants to confront him about it! I don’t know what he has p-planned but he left as soon as we f-found out who it was that a-abused you when we were with SM! I c-couldn’t stop him! You n-need to bring him back to his s-senses! Call him! Talk to him, Jaejoong! I’m afraid he’s g-going to do s-something stupid ( ... )

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CHAPTER 16 ENDING BECAUSE IT WOULDN'T FIT!!!!! smartcatt September 19 2013, 18:33:02 UTC
“W-We won’t make it in time…” Jaejoong mumbled, his face ashen as he turned to stare at Junsu. The younger man doing a poor job at covering up his own fear filled heart. “It’s too late…”

“Oh…” Junsu nodded, head swimming with the revelations the night had brought. “…We j-just need to trust him…trust t-that Yunho won’t let us down…”

“Mhm.” Jaejoong head slowly nodded, vision blurring while the adrenaline continued to course through his veins. “We need to….trust Yunho…”

Yoochun cursed under his breath, hand falling from Jaejoong’s trembling shoulder. Instead he turned both eyes on his soul mate, speaking volumes through gaze alone. “….Can….can you trust him?”

Jaejoong held Yoochun’s gaze.

Gaining strength from the people around him, he nodded his head. “Oh…I trust him.”

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toshiani007 September 19 2013, 19:59:44 UTC
Wow!!! Brilliant update!!!
Loved it!!!

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smartcatt September 19 2013, 22:17:02 UTC
OOOOOOH THANK YOU!!!!
<3

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hyunnyb September 19 2013, 20:59:16 UTC
The intensity of this story just never ends! Another tension filled chapter during which I unconsciously chewed off a couple fingernails. You have me so worried for all of them, but especially Jaejoong. I can't help but feel that Yunho is walking into a minefield and Jaejoong is being pushed to his absolute limits. Excellent writing as always and thank you for sharing it<3

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smartcatt September 19 2013, 22:18:22 UTC
Even I was hyperventilating while writing this. This makes me use up so much of my emotional energy that after I finish a chapter, I feel soooooo drained >.<
But glad to hear you enjoyed it!

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katie3863 September 19 2013, 21:25:34 UTC
Wow that was intense! Now from what I know of the fan accounts, Yunho was always very protective of Jae, so the fact that someone would go this far to hurt his loved one. Someone is gonna be in pain by the end of the day. I can't wait for that confrontation!

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smartcatt September 19 2013, 22:27:05 UTC
Yep. It's going to be big.


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