Destiny's Crossfire Chapter 11 Part 1

Jul 14, 2013 09:16


Title: Destiny's Crossfire
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Length: Chaptered (11/20)
Genre: Angst, drama, Non-AU, bandfic, romance, post-lawsuit
Summary: Sometimes the only things that brings us together are the accidents that make up our worst nightmares.
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bandfic, yunjae, destiny's crossfire, ot5, angst, romance

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phinea2009 July 14 2013, 14:24:34 UTC
The images evoked are too vivid. I had to stop reading half way. I couldn't stomach what Yunho was about to do. Thank goodness Yoochun returned when he did.

However, I hope they all find it in their hearts to forgive each other.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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katie3863 July 14 2013, 14:26:16 UTC
In a few words...OH MY GOD YUNHO!!!!! I know he has a temper, but this was too much!

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smartcatt July 16 2013, 16:26:19 UTC
T.T
He snapped

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hujanbiru July 14 2013, 14:42:53 UTC
It's so sad..

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aisyah_legend July 14 2013, 16:17:43 UTC
omg..the fight is really terrible...it's so sad..you write the fight so vividly that i can imagine it..
so that's yunho's mistake that yoochun can't forgive..

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smartcatt July 16 2013, 16:27:01 UTC
Goal met ;)
If you can see it playing in your head then I've done my job

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i knew it mcarol85 July 14 2013, 17:57:38 UTC
Of all the possibilities I knew take was the highest contestant for your warning.
Fortunately he was stopped, but I can see why chun is so hostile to yunho.
Keep it up :-). The suspense And angst is great, the happy ending will feel greater :-).

Hwaitinf"

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