Comments | smbattle: [Challenge 01] ♣ Round Seven

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[Challenge 01] ♣ Round Seven - Results

Dec 05, 2008 22:30

First off, my apologies, since I took an unannounced hiatus from this comm when RL was kicking my ass really badly and I'm sorry about that! Rest assured, I'm back and I haven't abandoned this comm. ♥

And also, I've changed journals, so now I'll be using this journal [arrowlights] to post updates. :)

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( The eliminated icons are: )

*round seven, type: results, !challenge 01

Comments 3

anonymous December 5 2008, 15:29:14 UTC

arrowlights December 7 2008, 08:50:56 UTC

ELIMINATION CRITS:

- The texture used in Icon 01 seems to blend in too much with his nose. In Icon 02, the text seems too overpowering with it's size.
- The texture in the first icon makes the image look LQ.
- While the guideline was visible text, the text in the second icon seems to take the focus away from Junsu.

FAVOURITE COMMENTS:

- i love the cropping and the typography on the second one is pretty.
- the icons are simple and elegant. the coloring of the first brings out junsu's bright personality even in the seriousness of the icon. the lightness of the coloring of the second makes junsu look serene.

anonymous December 5 2008, 15:29:38 UTC

arrowlights December 7 2008, 08:51:54 UTC

ELIMINATION CRITS:

- the tiny text doesn't really do much for the first icon and the white part on the second icon looks out of place. D:
- the coloring on the first icon is ok but the light texture seems out of place. in the second one, sungmin's skin color is too yellow.

FAVOURITE COMMENTS:

- In some of the icons where people used/not used exclusion/multiply layers etc the coloring on both icons still look the same. But on these icons you can clearly see the differents.
- The icons are not over-crowded and carry off a simple concept well.
- The coloring is nice. Simple, but attractive.

anonymous December 5 2008, 19:58:27 UTC

arrowlights December 7 2008, 08:52:36 UTC

FAVOURITE COMMENTS:

- although the use of textures for the first icon seems a bit too much, the cropping is just awesome. the coloring on the second icon is fantastic, and the text in the background does not overpower the image. great job on this set.
- i like the cropping in the second icon, and the text works well with the compostion. in the first one, it might seem crowded for some. but it looks more like a piece of art actually. think, vetruvian man.