Akira angst.

Mar 07, 2007 17:11

yoTitle: Comfortably Numb
Author: Smem.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Character Death
Summary: Yamagata's final thoughts.
Notes: Vague songfic/drabble to Pink Floyd's Comfortably Numb.

There is no pain, you are receding.
A distant ships smoke on the horizon.
You are only coming through in waves.
Your lips move but I cant hear what you're saying
When I was a child I ( Read more... )

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versipellis March 8 2007, 08:55:14 UTC
Oh...

That was really good. Your prose was incredibly focused and put together, and I loved the way the death wasn't frightening for him, it was almost a relief. It was sad, but yet kind of hopeful in a way. The last line is amazing though.

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kai_the_great March 8 2007, 19:40:00 UTC
Gosh! xD
Thank you! That review made me all happy and tingly.
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versipellis March 8 2007, 20:18:38 UTC
Well, you totally deserved to be tingly - the fic was a lovely surprise in a stressy day, and as I said, it was great! So... yay XD

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