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The Dance (Interlude) - Hooked On A Feeling

Feb 14, 2008 10:00

Genre/Pairing: Canon/AU, Jack/Ennis/Chocolate

Rating: R for gratuitous sex and chocolate.

Summary: Today is the anniversary of my first Package post. So, although this interlude doesn't take place on Valentine's Day, there's plenty of romance, and sex, and, did I mention, chocolate. Thank so much for sticking with me and encouraging me with my ( Read more... )

smiles_a_lot, the dance

Comments 58

rosiet February 14 2008, 16:57:26 UTC

Oh Em! How I loved this! Just perfect for today ( ... )

smiles_a_lot February 15 2008, 04:54:46 UTC

A lovely comment, as always, from Beta Ninja # 1. Thanks again for looking this over for me on very little notice.

As you know, I'm a giggly girl. So I usually don't feel satisfied with a chapter unless I'm giggling as I write some of it. I must admit I did a fair bit of giggling writing some of the dialogue for this chapter. And a fair bit of crying, too, as I've told you. Ennis revealed a lot of himself to me in this chapter and it's been a very healing experience. Thanks for being part of it. ♥ Em

riverton44 February 14 2008, 16:57:44 UTC

Wow! It was hot...and sweet...and sad...
Happy Anniversary!!! And thanks for writing!

smiles_a_lot February 15 2008, 04:55:56 UTC

Thank you. It feels good to be writing. There's no place like home.

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smiles_a_lot February 15 2008, 05:00:59 UTC

Hey Kathy: Sorry you have the flu. Although BBM ff really came through today to give you some medicine, huh? I mean, hello, I bow to the MadLori and her chocolate covered cherries.
So I'm glad I could be part of the cure. As for dreams, well, my boys tend to dream a lot. Last time we had Jack and the subway. So I figured it was time Ennis got the voodoo. It's only fair. Thanks for reading, and hope you feel better. xx Em

samtyr February 14 2008, 17:15:44 UTC

Mmmmm -- chocolate-covered Jack, what could be better? ::thinks:: Loved this, especially what a vivid dream life Ennis has. That's very interesting.

smiles_a_lot February 15 2008, 05:06:48 UTC

Mmmm - what could be better? Ummm, I'm thinking pretty much nothing. Although I think a few readers are intrigued by the Jack in leather chaps with no pants on image. I just love writing dreams, it's a perfect way to go A/U within a Canon fic. Plus my chapters are in strict one-person POV, so this is one way I can bounce around in someone's head without messing up the storyline. Glad you found it interesting. xx

tmn1966 February 14 2008, 17:31:44 UTC

I love that Ennis gets turned on when they bitch at each other.

“You bring it? That voodoo stuff?”

Oh, dear. Just imagining Ennis saying that. THUD.

I'm so glad that you were able to write this. It's wonderful! Thank you, Em.

Teri

smiles_a_lot February 15 2008, 05:11:57 UTC

Oh yeah. If Jack Twist was looking at me all intense and bitchy, I ain't gonna lie, I would totally rip his clothes off.
Teri - thanks for your comment. But you've got to know one of the reasons why I managed to write this is because I was inspired by yourself and other writers who are still telling their stories, and are giving people the love and healing they need by bolstering this fandom. Thank you. xx Em