Bank Shot: Emotional Rescue (LoveFest Entry # 4)

Mar 11, 2008 13:07


Pairing: Jack/Ennis

Rating: **** for graphic sex. Kinks abound: toys, public sex, slight bdsm elements and two-lines of a three-some. Warning: some people's boundaries will get pushed.

Summary: Jack and Ennis have had close encounters in a bank vault, at the library and are now at a sex club. Wonder what will happen in that sex club? Could it be... ( Read more... )

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cathyinaz March 12 2008, 02:15:37 UTC
I really liked this story! Even with some parts of it making me squirm a little in discomfort, I still felt safe just like Jack did.

"Guess there were a lot of Stones fans in the crowd." This line had me laughing out loud!

Thanks so much for sharing.

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smiles_a_lot March 15 2008, 12:57:55 UTC
Hey Cathy:

Glad you liked this, squirmy bits and all. This fic is all about safety and trust. So I'm glad you trusted me enough to let me take you through the Lounge. Laughter is the best medicine, isn't it?

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fizzerbass March 12 2008, 02:19:23 UTC
My eyes! My eyes! OMG, my eyes! I'm blind, I tell you, blind! But wait, what's that I hear? Not-so-soft moans, groans of pleasure, grunts of satisfaction? And what's that I feel? Sweat-slicked skin, coarse hair circling a nipple and trailing down a wandering path to a trove of treaure? Oh, and mmmm...what's that I smell? Cologne and sweat and the musk of superbly-satisfying smex? It appears my senses have come alive to make up for my lack of sight.

Or it could just be your incredibly excellent, descriptive writing. :)

Glad you got your kink on,
Ef

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smiles_a_lot March 15 2008, 13:02:48 UTC
Hey Effy Tower:

I hope you get your sight back. My Mama always told me it's all fun and games until someone loses as eye. Although the sharpening of your senses ain't a bad thing, from what I can gather.
Hey, I just thought of something. I wonder what it would be like to read this chapter in braille. I bet that would be hot. I mean, running your fingers over some of these words. Yowsers...
Umm, okay I'm back from my side trip. It seems the kink is definitely on. How bout we write something to celebrate?

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smiles_a_lot March 15 2008, 13:03:44 UTC
You want more dancing? Poor Jack can barely walk! lol. Glad you enjoyed this.

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tmn1966 March 12 2008, 02:42:41 UTC
Whew, so glad you gave out those warnings. I would have fallen down and hurt myself if I hadn't already been on the floor as so instructed.

Okay, you get extra points for mentioning both Ryan Seacrest AND Howie Mandell in the same chapter.

Many thanks for fizzer giving you the idea of the bank vault, and to you for running with it. I can't wait to read the epilogue, but I really think that you should revisit these guys again.

Thanks for the humor and the hotness. Both very much needed.

Teri

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smiles_a_lot March 15 2008, 13:06:22 UTC
Yeah, good thing you heeded those warnings. Safety first, I always say.

LOL. Ryan Seacrest and Howie Mandell, it was a natural progression, don't you think? I wanted to mention two other people but I'm saving them for the epilogue. ;)

Glad this gave you what you needed. The day can't be all that bad if you're able to have at least one laugh within it. xx

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bbmbeliever March 12 2008, 02:45:12 UTC
Oddly I didnt feel squirmy at all with this story, I just enjoyed it completely. I think The Ties that Bind has made me a lot more comfortable with the whole scene. I love the whole thing now, for J&E at least!

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smiles_a_lot March 15 2008, 13:09:26 UTC
Yes, TTTB was groundbreaking for me as well. I'm still a bit shy about writing anything in that spectrum because, really, I have no experience in it and as much as I joke about it, I hate to write anything without some sort of research. I did do a bit for this but not nearly enough to write a full bdsm scene with conviction. Glad this worked for you. xx

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