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smiles_a_lot

The Dance: Chapter 13 - Smoke on the Horizon

Apr 21, 2008 00:08

Genre & Rating: Canon/AU, R for cursing.

Disclaimer: Jack and Ennis were created by the Great and Mighty Annie Proulx. I'm just the dude behind the yellow curtain working the lights and using the Big Voice microphone.

Summary: This is the continuation of The Package, and takes place after Ennis and Alma's divorce. Ennis has moved to Kansas and is ( Read more... )

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Comments 52

eandj April 21 2008, 17:35:01 UTC

Glad to have this story back
I've missed it.
Ennis is opening up, making friends(-uhuu this Janie sure is something else), calling his sister- I think he's on a good way.
thanks so much for posting
Paula

smiles_a_lot April 26 2008, 04:46:22 UTC

Hey Paula:

It feels good to be back and in this world again. As for Janie, she defies description, doesn't she? lol. But I hear she makes really good fudge, whatever's left of it. :) Em

ramona4jake April 21 2008, 20:05:08 UTC

I was missing your story !
I liked very much the part about Ennis and Nick going shopping - funny ! And I was sad for Nick and his friends from Nam... But the part where Ennis finds another part of him and put it in its right place was beautiful !
Thank you, don't let so much time to pass before you up-date again....please ?!!

smiles_a_lot April 26 2008, 04:48:35 UTC

I was missing my story, too!! So I'm very glad to be back. Ennis is kind of like the bionic man, right now, trying to rebuild himself. I hope to update every two weeks. Unfortunately, a minor medical condition is making it difficult for me to update any faster than that. Thanks for sticking with me, I appreciate it. Em

brokeback1963 April 21 2008, 20:13:55 UTC

OMG, I was soooooooooooooooooooo happy when I saw this up date. I still am. I dreamt about this chapter for so long. Now, this is more than I could expect. Very emotional, deep, powerful chapter. I know this was not easy for you, but hey, the final result is just perfect. Oh girl, I missed your boys so bad. They mean a lot to me ( ... )

smiles_a_lot April 26 2008, 04:52:04 UTC

Darling Tammy. You warm my heart, you really do. What a gift you have. Thanks for letting me know what parts you enjoyed and for your always enthusiastic response. Glad I had you laughing. Consider that payment for all the joy your comments bring me. xx Em

bbmjack324 April 22 2008, 00:23:35 UTC

“’Spose if we’re gonna be fucked up, we might as well be fucked up together.”

Ennis thought on Jack and this sweet life they been dreaming about. Truer words were never spoken.

Gotta agree with this definitely.

smiles_a_lot April 26 2008, 04:52:33 UTC

Thanks for your comment and thanks for reading. Em

samtyr April 22 2008, 01:19:59 UTC

I was so glad to see this update. You've done an excellent job here, everything was solidly done. I'm glad that Ennis and Nick are friends, they are good for each other. I was hoping that Ennis would call Jack but I'm glad he got a chance to talk to his sister. I am very eager to read the next chapter now. Thank you so much for sharing this.

smiles_a_lot April 26 2008, 04:54:43 UTC

Hey Sam:
I know, I'm sure you're not the only person who wished Ennis had called Jack. All in good time...Meanwhile, thanks for letting me know you're still reading despite my own personal writer's strike! I'm updating every two weeks, so you won't be waiting too much longer. xx Em