CSI Fan Fiction - Dead Man's Party: The Ghost in the Machine Chapter Three

Nov 04, 2011 17:45

Title:Dead Man's Party: The Ghost in the Machine
Chapter: Three (of Four): The Freshmen ( Chapter One) ( Chapter Two)
Author: smilesinc aka WitchGirl
Fandom: CSI
Characters: Archie Johnson (Greg, Brass and Lab Rats make appearances)
Pairings: None
Rating: Teen/PG-13
Genre: Supernatural/Horror/Mystery
Time Line: This story is meant to take place in October of ( Read more... )

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smilesinc November 16 2011, 08:22:59 UTC
I'm glad you liked the character I wrote two lines for. One of my favorite exercises in my useless creative writing major classes were "character squeezes" aka "how to make a character interesting when you have zero time to introduce them and they don't really matter to the story anyway." I'm glad that those classes have paid off. Hurrah!

Also, thanks for reading this! I know Archie's not your character of choice. Dunno if horror's your genre. But at any rate, I always look forward to your encouraging comments.

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smilesinc November 16 2011, 19:37:41 UTC
I adore the lab rats, if my latest icons haven't said as much on that topic already. I fell in love a little with Henry before Appendicitement, when he wasn't all sarcastic and odd. Before that, he was characterized as kind of an optimistic puppy dog, what with how he was all worship-y of Greg and how he said silly things. But I guess they all have to grow up sometime and become bitter and sarcastic. Wait, why do they have to do that?

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