CSI Fan Fiction - Dead Man's Party: The Ghost in the Machine Chapter Four

[smilesinc]

Title:Dead Man's Party: The Ghost in the Machine
Chapter: Four (of Four): Dead Again ( Chapter One) ( Chapter Two) ( Chapter Three)
Author: smilesinc aka WitchGirl
Fandom: CSI
Characters: Archie Johnson (Greg, Brass and Lab Rats make appearances)
Pairings: None
Rating: Teen/PG-13
Genre: Supernatural/Horror/Mystery
Time Line: This story is meant to take place

Comments

[smilesinc]

It scared you?! Awesome. I was worried I made my ghost too "friendly" to be scary. LOL, and I'm glad that you liked some of the twists I dropped in there, and the explanation for "why now?" Figured Libby, being the protective girl she was in life, could stand leaving her case unsolved - but not at the cost of someone else's life.

Thanks for reading all these, really appreciate your comments, as always. :o)

Predictable, but still fun

[felidae5]

*giggles* Very nicely done, this one here. I love the atmospheres you've woven, especially the one on the graveyard, and the interaction between Libby and Archie. Though Archie tends to fall out of character here and there, but considering the circumstances, that's quite reasonable. Again, a fun creepy bedtime story.

Felidae