Comments | smilesofalover: Memories of You

candielover93 in smilesofalover

Memories of You

Jan 04, 2009 21:26

Memories of You
Yunho/Jaejoong.
AU/Drama
R
2,293 words.
All my memories of you are so precious…Please don’t let me forget any of them. Why did life have to turn out this way?

Warning: Implied character death(s), dark social issues.

( He dreams of better days when he feels exhaustion creep into his bones, days that were filled with sunshine, freedom, and gentle laughter. )

fandom: dbsk (2003-2009), rating: r, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, warning: social issues, genre: alternate universe, focus: yunho, genre: drama, length: oneshot, warning: character death

Comments 14

aprettyeternity January 5 2009, 06:50:25 UTC

Oh my.

♥ I'll reread this and actually give a comment later. But yeah.

My bb is amazing.

candielover93 January 5 2009, 06:59:03 UTC

So I'm guessing this means it didn't fail as much as I thought it would? XD;

aprettyeternity January 7 2009, 01:35:43 UTC

Yes definitely. *cries* You went on hiatus? *BAWLS* I'll save my full comment until you're back.

candielover93 January 7 2009, 20:58:12 UTC

I couldn't help it, bb :( Finals are killing me. B-but why must you save the full comment for when I'm back? D: That's like... almost a full month away!

alex202 January 5 2009, 09:38:43 UTC

It is hurtful...
My mood is kind of down after reading your fic..awww..
My breath hitched when i read the part that JJ was raped ..

The story is full of Yun's memories when he was with JJ , eventhough its desultory but still makes perfect sense to me :)

How come
laughter, stolen kisses, passion, love-

turn out to be

(pain,
fear,
separation-)
death.

???????

:((

candielover93 January 7 2009, 21:00:03 UTC

Well, the "laughter, stolen kisses, passion, and love" part is before Jaejoong was raped. The pain, fear, separation, and death are the times after.

Thanks for reading! (:

jaeholife January 5 2009, 17:52:13 UTC

omg, this is so sad,and it hurts more when you find that jae is longer with yunho anymore.....

reallly it was really beautiful, hurtful, and made perfect sense...
but really I want to kill the guy who raped jae, root of the break up...damn him......

anyway really loved it....but I am sad now ....

:(((

candielover93 January 7 2009, 21:05:00 UTC

Well, back then people who loved the same gender as themselves weren't... exactly accepted. :\ And I'm sorry about making you sad.

Thanks for reading! (:

imie_schweetzel January 5 2009, 21:38:28 UTC

OH. MY. GOD.

*cries*

well-written piece, but so heartbreaking i think a bit of me died inside. ;~;

candielover93 January 7 2009, 21:04:00 UTC

Your icon's adorable ♥

I'm sorry :(

Thanks for reading! ♥

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candielover93 January 7 2009, 21:00:29 UTC

♥

Thank you for reading! (: